They Only Went and Done It

In our mountainside cabin
On an Autumn August night
We turn on the news
To hear of our countries plight

Terrorist factions
Will detonate a device
That will flatten our city
Destroying millions of lives

If their demands are not met
By midnight tonight
All that we have
Will disappear from sight

The hours pass
Bulletin after bulletin
As I think to myself
It's just a matter of when

Many thoughts
Are now running through our heads
Trying to phone our families
Struggling to comprehend

Minutes seem like days
As midnight draws near
Towards our city home we look
Captured in unknown fear

On the cabin balcony we stand
Listening to the TV set
It's the voice of the city mayor
No terrorist demands will ever be met

I turn to my wife
Tears streaming down her face
We are so far away from our children
In this beautiful tranquil place

The last chime of midnight passes
Holding hands to the horizon we view
An explosion of light so immense
To the heavens in mushroom spew

We can hear the thunderous roar
Although we are so far away
The crockery in the cabin now rattles
As we await our final day

The distance grows ever near
As we hear a strange whistling sound
Sporadic flashes light up the valley
Violent winds thrash our surrounds

Before our eyes, we believe
A nuclear tsunami heads our way
We declare our love and bow our heads
For our children and friends we pray

Our fa___________________________




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Date: 6/7/2010 9:14:00 AM
awesome :) I was trying to figure out how if possible to message people, I was going to thank you for the comments and such. THANK YOU :) I will be reading more soon as I have the chance :)
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:50:00 PM
Did you see the film "Red Dawn," James? Your poem captured the terror of people waiting to be annihilated by invaders. Very compelling story behind this verse. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:24:00 PM
James, this one is a great general mixture of emotions...Sad ending though...You should have been the hero and saved the day...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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