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They Can'T Find Home

an’t find home trees trunked as pillars a cathedral gallery edges my road through french farmland waking in mists of spring brown arched buttresses push green into the face of god a somber holiness escapes, the sound echoed among foliage floating above I sit to rest and there silently arise between rough bark men, grey as leaf mold approach to offer their deaths carried gingerly in cupped hands taste this, our tales of mortar shelled star burst murder on nights yellow with gas lungs choking closed blown into eternity by mined field’s crop of demise or whining whistle of rifle spew entering warm sacred bodies oozing life their beauty, sweet youth gone to earth beneath grasses where they should be lover’s heat now all, wander still those blood soaked fields mud, noise and death laid down to pave a path for old men dreaming glory.

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Date: 10/22/2017 3:31:00 PM
I have been trying, on and off, for quite a while to finish a poem I started several years ago as a tribute to the men of the First World War; I have to say this is quite brilliant, Patricia! Fantastic images! Wilfred Owen and Siegfried Sassoon would have nodded their esteemed heads in respectful admiration and agreement...beautifully composed, Patricia...truly it is. My warmest regards. :) john
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:13:00 PM
Thank you Craig.
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Date: 9/17/2017 4:08:00 PM
poignant write Patricia, so many young lives lost! Took the reader within as a silent witness. Regards, Craig
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/17/2017 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Craig.
Date: 8/4/2017 1:52:00 AM
An impressive parade of imageries that captivate the heart with their beauty dear, Patricia.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/4/2017 1:59:00 AM
I was watching a documentary film on Wrl War one battle fields. I began to feel a great sorrow in my heart thinking of all those young men, many mere children, who died there. I believe in an everlasting spirit which goes on forever. Are they still in those killing fields because they have not been found? Spirits wandering alone and lost.

Book: Shattered Sighs