They Bless the Seed

A gorge, ravine, the deepest pit
                         My feelings know that this is it
So deep inside, the body still
               As though they quake against my will

What causes one to reach so low
                        It’s not the end and yet I know
Extremes of life, the ups and downs
          The brightest smiles, the saddest frowns 

As wishes fly about inside
                             Searching for a wave to ride
I long to be as one with peace
                         To quell the stir, to find release

And then, I think, at least I feel
                        Though life is like a Ferris wheel
I’ll come around again to land
                    And I will know just where I stand

Be grateful that I’m here to see
                          The wonder that still is for me
Though tears may fall, they bless the seed
                        To bring about just what I need
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Proxenos Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 4:47 AM
Mike congratulations on this breathtaking poem been awarded POTD. You are my friend, both blessed and talented. Hugs Jennifer.
Gentile Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Thankyou so much Jennifer xxoo
Tor Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 10:03 PM
Conratualations Mike on this well deserving honor of POTD. The emotional rides of life are expressed perfectly here. God bless you and have much peace in your life...
Gentile Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 4:18 AM
Thank you Michael for your kind words !!
Horsman Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 6:59 AM
Been there many times, Mike, love your emotional ride depicted here in this superb poetry. So pleased it got POTD.
Gentile Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 7:26 PM
Thanks so much Harry!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 4:41 PM
Hello Mike , Life is a ferries wheel. Happy Firday. xxxxxx-oooo. Darlene
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June 11, 2022 at 4:14 AM
Hello Mike, good morning i just woke up. I see it this way to. Happy Saturday. xxxx-oooo, Darlene.
Gentile Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 12:22 AM
Yes it surely is Darlene, Happy Friday xxoo
Watt Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Mike, my condolences for events in your life that have caused the tears to flow so freely and for wishes to "fly about inside / Searching for a wave to ride", but congratulations for your second POTD on the subject and the vulnerable fluidity with which you write of pain. I wish I had that. Love the hope and wonder in the last 4 lines, tears blessing the seed is such a powerful metaphor. I continue to be amazed at your writing and the raw vibrancy you bring to it. I have much to learn. A Fave ~ John
Gentile Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 12:21 AM
John, your generosity and kindness are overwhelming! I know I can learn from you, thanks so much!!!
Doll Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 3:02 PM
Mike, Wonderful poem. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 6:53 PM
Thank you Warren!!!
Nicole Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:31 PM
We may not always get what we want, but we get what we need. Your words still tug at my heart. Congratulations Mike, on Poem of the Day. Happy Thursday to you. ~ Brandy
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 6:54 PM
Happy Thursday Brandy, thanks xxoo
Wolf Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 11:39 AM
May you always reap what you sew, Mike! Congrats on POTD. Gershon Appleseed
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Thanks GW !!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Wonderful" write. Life is filled with joy and pain. Have a great/blessed day with your wonderful win.........................
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Paula xxoo
Lawless Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Wow, Mike, you hit this one out of the bark...."though life is like a Ferris wheel'..fantastic metaphor......just keep the belt fastened.
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Thank you so much John!!!
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June 9, 2022 at 10:07 AM
So true to life Mike, congratulations on a well deserved poem of the day with this awesome write… Belle
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:27 PM
Thanks so much Belle !!!
Hankins Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 9:02 AM
Back to say CONGRATULATIONS, Mike. I knew this was a winner! You really deserved this P.O.T.D. honor! Have a happy Thursday and bask in your success!
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:27 PM
That's so kind, thanks Milt!!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 8:26 AM
Great emotion is stirred in the poet!
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Kim xxoo
Kyser Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Very nice flow, Mike. Reads really well.
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:28 PM
Thanks Jeff !!
Romios Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations, Mike! A Magical Piem fom your pen. Panagiota
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:28 PM
Thank you so much xxoo
Buhagiar Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 7:31 AM
Well done for your POTD.
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Victor!!
Calasibetta Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 7:24 AM
Mike congratulations on your beautiful and moving poem of the day! “though tears may fall, they bless the seed to bring about just what I need”~powerful and reflective! :)Paulette
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:29 PM
Thank you so much Paulette xxoo
Baker Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 6:53 AM
Heartfelt, passionate poem, Mike. The last line was powerful and insightful. Congratulation on your POTD honor my friend. Never Give Up! as Churchill once said in a famous speech. Your poetry is needed to help others. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Bill !!
Lawrence Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 6:46 AM
Wow Mike your emotions and heart are on full display here. I love your raw vulnerability and the words you spill so beautifully from your pen. Just so real and honest. Big congratulations on POTD! Hugs always, Susan :)
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:34 PM
Thank you so much Susan xxoo
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 6:06 AM
I love the idea that tears grow the seeds and bring about just what you need. Beautiful! Congratulations on your wonderful POTD honor Mike. Blessings xxoo
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:34 PM
Thank you Connie xxoo
George Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 5:19 AM
Life is a one with a mixed pack of joy and pain. Life does come back and pain shall give way to joy as the wheel of life rotates. Lovely poem with much depth of meaning. Mike, congratulations on your well deserved POTD
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Thank you so much Valsa xxoo
Pandit Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 4:56 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Mike. Enjoy your day.
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Thank you Vijay !!
Kitchin Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 4:51 AM
Mike, a great poem, life is just like a ferris wheel, congratulations on POTD!
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Thank you Tania xxoo
La France Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 3:59 AM
Mike, wonderfully penned and emotional, I like your comparison of life to a ferris wheel and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 4:24 AM
Thank you so much Constance!!!
M  Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 2:54 AM
Life in a nutshell Mike….beautifully described and written. I’m surprised I missed this? I’m so happy you got POTD you so deserve it! Debx
Gentile Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 4:24 AM
That's so kind, thanks Deb xxoo
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