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Two hearts who see, for the first time The light, so brilliant, twinkling In eyes who smile, revealing the feeling More alive than the past, more precious Than the future – more successful than This moment, surviving the darkest shadows, Silhouettes of the madness, the fear That dims the feelings, the blessings so aware Today, within the flames of this passion, There is the arising of forever, Combined with the sweetness of a love Far more beautiful than the thought That comes to life inside the heart who knows This is a love that will grow and grow, Never fading, never dying – this is a love That will survive the tests of time, without Deserting the hearts who, even in silence, Discovered the truth of love’s endless hope It is two hearts, two souls who know This is the night that brought them into the Light, into the wonder of a trembling Excitement, a thrill far more alive than Anyone could possibly reveal, assuring them Without a doubt, this is a feeling, a love That will always fill them up with the music, Mosaic, electrifying… Melody so graceful, awakening the prayers, The faith – the mutual – a union Filled with more than words, more than dreams A relationship built from Three…. You and Me – and the Love that He brings When He sends us His promises On wings of peace – on grace that frees… Forever, we’ll be – together – you, me and Him The One who is more than a friend – He is the Light, the love, the life that gives us eternity – On this date, this dream – forever comes to life Because He reminds us all, He is a living sacrifice! My Dream Date Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon January 24, 2023

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Date: 2/21/2023 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write/picture. Yes, the sacrifice. Have a blessed day.........................
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