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I have waited And still wait For break of dawn and Nita, my woman I have sorrowed And still sorrow This hook of fate Delay not my woman! I have thirsted And still thirst At the fountain of love And still wait for her. Now the sun has risen And workers hurry to town And children back to school But still no sign of Nita! Nita, if these lines should reach you Hasten! My heart is sore with yearning!

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Date: 1/27/2014 2:39:00 PM
Oh wow, this is a different approach I have yet come across...awesome piece and thanks for the visit my friend.
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 1/27/2014 4:53:00 PM
Pace, Heather, Rose... you fill me with new energy to keep on writing.
Date: 7/28/2013 4:09:00 PM
It's always special when a man waits for a woman with such passion! Great poem! -Heather
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