These Four Walls


my four walls are invisible, they cannot be seen
but they are thick, wide and deep after all these years
each board, each nail, a sorrow, a tear, a grief
I hide myself within these self-made high walls
secluded, concealed, my secret refuge from the world
I am safe within my box, I cannot be hurt in my fortress . . .

my box, my fortress has no ceiling and I can see the azure sky
the falling rain washes over me, the wind speaks to me, softly
snow, I gather like a pure white blanket
and my mind takes me to wonderful places, far off lands
and my fantasies are breathless and beautiful
and I write poetry, pages and pages, fluttering away
oh my box is a special place where tranquility dwells . . . 

but sometimes, oh dark the journey, I visit death
down winding roads and I am a beautiful girl floating wispy
my long raven hair flowing like a cloud around me
and I stand before tombs, tombs and tombs
and those beneath the cold earth come to me
weeping we kiss until the light of dawn takes me away
back to my four walls, my box, my fortress with no ceiling . . . 

and when I must venture into the real world, I wear a mask
a mask of happiness, I can never let anyone see
the pain within, it would shatter their hearts forever
oh my soul and heart are  broken for all infinity, this is written
there has been too much death, too much sorrow, just too much
you have no idea, dear reader, you can even fathom it . . . 

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February 19, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/these four walls
Copyright Protected, ID 16-759-533-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Four Walls
Sponsor, C.T.

Second Place
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Submitted to the contest, Second Place Contest
sponsor, Laura Loo

Seventh Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Very deep pain of life expressed with tremendous beauty. My favorite one. A 7 sure. Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
Scars Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Broken Wings, a beautiful poem here you have a true gift lovely lady, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Johnson Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Congrats Broken Wings. Happy that you placed high. Bless U. Curtis
La France Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Curtis, thanks for visiting with the congrats and the support, appreciate ~
Milliner Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Great write, Broken Wings!! It's good to know that your four wall box, has an open ceiling through which your poetic light shines!! Congratulations on your placement!!
La France Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Sarita, thanks for visiting with the nice comment and the congratulations !
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Congrats on your win. brilliant imagination letting me see...
La France Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Iris, thanks for visiting my poem with congrats and the brilliant ~
Carmack Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Congrats to you Constance. I particularly liked; "each board, each nail, a sorrow, a tear, a grief".
La France Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Rob, thanks for the congrats, I like that line also !
Mcclain Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 1:46 PM
Hi Broken Wings, Congratulation on your win. Excellent poem--very moving with powerful imagery. Cheers, Brian
La France Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 7:13 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting with the congratulations, the excellent and the compliment !
Richards Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 11:37 AM
We often tend to box ourselves into our own world of grief, when it is too much to bear. We all suffer sooner or later with our own 4 walls, dear Broken Wings, but we must carve our own windows to let in the sun as best we can. Such a sad, but wonderful poem, Constance! Congratulations to you once again. :) hugs!
La France Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Carrie, thanks for visiting with the congratulations, the wonderful and the nice comment and of course the hugs !
Warrior Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Congrats on contest oh dark one...^WW^
La France Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Winged, thanks for the congrats !
A   Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your "4 walls" win.... Love LINDA
La France Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 7:41 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations !
T  Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Thank you
La France Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 7:42 PM
CT, thank you for a great contest and for my wonderful placement, I am honored !
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 4:29 PM
My friend. May you place well in this contest. Well written and easy to follow. It was as if I saw you in the market place with your pain and sorrow tucked away beyond the view of any and all. But I also see "Another", unseen also by any and all, looking in on the pain and sorrow. He is being deeply touched by all that's within, unseen, and unknown by others. God bless. Curtis.
La France Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Curtis, thanks so much for visiting with that wonderful comment, you see the picture I paint with my words so clearly . . .
George   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Top-notch entry, Constance. You are so creative!!
La France Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Elaine, thanks for visiting and the compliments, so appreciated !
Godwin Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Excellent! I think this is extremely clever and witty - love it ... CayCay
La France Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 12:59 PM
CayCay, your so funny, thanks for the excellent and the clever and witty and the love, but, its not done yet !!!
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