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These Fleeting Gardens

Amidst the hushed whispers of a fading day I wander, lost, through paths rosy poised thorns Seeking solace in the floras sweet newly buds Rose petals scattered, viscera of spite Petals that once adorned the beauty's scorn Now wither, like the nigh memories we cling To the fleeting moments of sugar cloy In darkness, chanting mantra whispers low Ennui’s eternal flame, that burns dire A symbol of peace, in the heart's darkest night A secret garden, where seeds take root in fire

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Date: 8/8/2024 3:49:00 AM
I feel I’m immersed in a gothic scene from a Hammer Horror film. Fascinating. If these words were sung I suspect Kate Bush would be my choice. All good but I particularly enjoyed that last line: “A secret garden, where seeds take root of fire”. Cheers - Gary
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Beatrix Macabre
Date: 8/8/2024 7:42:00 PM
I get that a lot, like a song bird.. I am glad you enjoyed, thank you for the lovely comment

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