There's the Rub

Oh but to rest this mad toiling mind!
Sleep? Nay, to sleep perchance to dream
Dreams. Ay, there lay the problem
How, then, to find solace
Can it be achieved... 
true peace of mind? 
Not in life
but in
death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Lawless Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Just found this while strolling about the PS pages. Glad I happened on it.
Thomas Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Thank you John :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 7:27 AM
Probably true, but I am in no rush to achieve that state. ;0)
Thomas Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Lol, we would be of the same mind there Rick.
Fraser Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Such is the struggle of true poets, an active mind that never rests but we thank God for the grace of a pen. Nicely portrayed here Flo. Blessing my friend, Carl
Thomas Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Thank you so much Carl. It's always uplifting to hear from you.
Roper Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 12:32 AM
So many nights I struggle to sleep. Only true peace of mind. Beautiful poem, dear friend. Hugs Eve
Thomas Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 2:29 PM
Thank you but how are you feeling dear Eve?
May Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Counting the minutes till the sandman comes, Lovely Nonet Flo, hugs
Thomas Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 2:28 PM
Hey Joseph :) Thank you very much.
Puddifoot Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 4:37 PM
being an insomniac i can relate to this! good nonet, they aren't easy
Thomas Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Thank you Charlotte. We're twins with the insomnia!
Canerdy Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 3:37 PM
Excellent nonet, FJ. Janice
Thomas Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Thanks Janice!
Breidenthal Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Great summary of "to be or not to be" clever indeed. always, Laura
Thomas Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Hey Laura! How have you been? Thank you :)
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 4:52 AM
I have one of those over active brains myself. Sleeping and dreaming does help to clear the mind for sure but one can visit nature in some form which will help. Choose life. Sara
Thomas Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Nature is always a reprieve :) Thank you Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 10:23 PM
I like not to be a total pessimist. I'm sure that at times I do get a peace of mind. But as I grow older I realize death will end al earthly worries..so long as we ave led a righteous life. ~~
Thomas Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:15 PM
I agree Victor :) Thank you.
La France Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 10:56 AM
FJ, wonderful write, I do believe that death brings peace, the end of pain for many, the end of worry and torment to a place of peace, I suffer from bad dreams often and just get up and do something until sleepy again(I have been known to do housework in the middle of the night!) I actually get my best sleep on the sofa when I am suppose to be watching TV _Constance
Thomas Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:15 PM
I used to night clean as well :) I think a lifetime of a lack of sleep is catching up with me though; I can no longer just be active while awake. My mind is active but my body drags. Thank you Constance :)
Horsman Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 12:22 AM
Now i truly understand your comment on my 'a thief called time' Your poem a theme that so many of us can relate to. Love the classic touch here too..All the best for the new year...
Thomas Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Ah yes sir :) I do not sleep much; and when I do rest is oft stolen by disturbing dreams. Sooo tired most of the time. Thank you Harry :)
Parker Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 5:22 PM
and yet death be our pardon, free from this world of tangled webs and lies, could that my hand be put upon to dispel all such things though I have no power I await the final outcome when the dark spirit appears to carry me down the river Styx...Merry Christmas my dear poetic friend
Thomas Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Oh my how very Elizabethan Frederic! And how very happy are we to not actually have to traverse that river! How are you my friend? :)
Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 11:44 AM
- Dear sister, we are all day flies ... a little dot at a point in the universe - surrounded by the dreams of eternity - "Live each day as if it were the last" and "Look at the day as a gift that you have unexpectedly received" - I wish you and your family a Marry Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Thomas Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Definitely appreciating each day as a gift søster! Thank you Anne-Lise
Devonshire Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Although we sometimes have difficulty falling asleep now, eternal rest awaits. I like to think our departed loved ones do enjoy peace of mind at the end of their lives. Beautifully penned, FJ. Hope you have a wonderful holiday season! Hugs, Carolyn
Thomas Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 1:10 PM
Thank you Carolyn :) Hugs right back atcha!
Wolf Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 6:23 PM
Willy is shaking up in Poetry Heaven somewhere. Nicely done! ~ The Thane
Thomas Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Lol thank you dear nobleman for giving me so much time. Stay safe GW!
Logan Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 8:25 AM
Hi, FJ. I appreciate the reference to Shakespeare. There is no peace in sleep, for dreams are not always pleasant. Only in death, when we are conscience of nothing is there true peace.
Thomas Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 10:50 AM
Exactly Jenna :) No pain, no suffering, no worrying about loved ones still living in a terrible world... nothing. Thank you ;°)
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