There's a Horse In Our Garage

Of all the horses I have known,
And I have known a few,
It's of Rebel, my daughter's first loved horse
That I'll be telling you.
Her girl friends on the nearby farms
Had horses theirs to ride.
That she could not have a horse too,
She just could not abide.
We lived in a little pioneer town.
Our home had a tiny yard.
To fulfill my small girl's wishes
Would truly be too hard.
One day I found her crying and
It broke my mother heart.
I told her we'd look for a horse.
At least we'd make a start.
Well, that was all I need to say.
There was no reneging now.
We'd have to ask her daddy
And I didn't quite know how.
Her fresh tears won him over
And he told her he would try
To find the perfect horse for her
if she would no more cry.
We had an old unused garage.
If was mostly filled with trash.
She and her dad hauled to the dump,
What they couldn't sell for cash.
In June she went into the fields
Picking strawberries to help pay
For the horse for which she'd been looking
And would be finding any day.
At last there was one advertised
At we thought, a decent price.
She called her horse savvy uncle
To ask for his advice.
My brother checked the horse for her
And said that it was sound.
Exactly waht she wanted to hear,
She plunked her money down.
She cared for her horse the best she knew
And before long had proven she
Knew more about a horses's care
Than either her dad or me.
Rebel was quite a tall horse.
She had to climb to get astraddle
And sit up on his bare back.
We could not afford a saddle.
Rebel was the perfect horse
For a loving ten year old.
He was docile, slow and gentle.
Only when loose did he get bold.
There were times when he would get away,
From where ever he'd been tied.
He'd whip around and run again,
Just when we reached his side.
She and her friends had lots of fun
In those happy carefree days.
Swimming across the Swinomish Slough
Is a memory that stays
Our daughter got her money's worth
From that big sturdy horse,
Until his age began to show
And Nature took it's course.

Our town has become more lucrative
It's residents  a richer crowd.
A horse stabled in garage these days
Would never be allowed.
My daughter raises horses now,
With the purest of blood line
But our Rebel of unknown heritage
At her age of ten was fine.



For Horse contest  took 7th place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/2/2010 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Joyce in Tirzah Conway's contest "A Horse Is A Horse Of Course". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2010 8:02:00 PM
Congrats, Joyce. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/30/2010 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on the 7th place win, Joyce
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Date: 7/30/2010 1:36:00 PM
You know the other verses are real, real, good, but something in this got me to me? I'm not yet in love with horses? Hmmmm, I guess it's because th tale was truely about a young woman, a force of life in her own right being made (there's a dreaded typo in here on line"Exactly waht she wanted to hear" what..hon) GREAT WIN! Light & Love
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Date: 7/30/2010 11:59:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Horses contest with this remarkable write and another marvelous win for u my friend... enjoy another top spot at the winners circle .. with luv..
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Date: 7/30/2010 10:40:00 AM
congrats on your win with this lovely poem
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Date: 7/30/2010 10:11:00 AM
There is always that one special horse that stands out above all else-I'm sure you'll remember him for the rest of your life! Congrat's on your 7th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/27/2010 9:25:00 PM
A most delightful entry Joyce.. and Tirzah will just luv this ..good luck my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:35:00 PM
nice one, really enjoyed it, good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:10:00 PM
very cute write!! must be a winner!
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