There Was An Old Man

There was an old man with no shoes Who liked watching the news When he was shouting And also demanding "Just go, and get me more booze! Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2014 September.21.2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/22/2014 4:16:00 AM

really smiling dorian that is some old boy he hates to miss the news lol excellent pen

Daver Austin

Date: 9/23/2014 1:45:00 PM

This old man got a chuckle, but those good old boozing days done passed. Good stuff. daver

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/23/2014 3:04:00 PM

Very good to hear that Daver! Lol... And I'm very glad to know that reading this one gave you a chuckle. Thank you my friend for dropping by and your comment which made me smile! love and Light! xxxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/22/2014 4:50:00 PM

Good one Dorian....I stopped watching the news about a year ago and don't believe I miss anything....hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/22/2014 5:05:00 PM

I can't blame you for that Tim! Lol... And I even agree with you! Thanks again for all your wonderful and funny comments my friend. Love and light! Hugs! xxxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2014 4:21:00 PM

LOl when you see all the bad news its no wonder he needed a drink:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/22/2014 4:37:00 PM

Don't we all! Lol .....thank you Jan! Hugs to you too my friend. xxxx D.