Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Limerick

There Was An Old Man

There was an old man with no shoes
Who liked watching the news
When he was shouting
And also demanding
"Just go, and get me more booze!


Dorian Petersen Potter
Aka ladydp2000
Copyright@2014

September.21.2014

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Liam Mcdaid October 22, 2014 at 4:16 AM really smiling dorian that is some old boy he hates to miss the news lol excellent pen

Daver Austin September 23, 2014 at 1:45 PM This old man got a chuckle, but those good old boozing days done passed. Good stuff. daver Dorian Petersen Potter September 23, 2014 at 3:04 PM Very good to hear that Daver! Lol... And I'm very glad to know that reading this one gave you a chuckle. Thank you my friend for dropping by and your comment which made me smile! love and Light! xxxx D.

Tim Smith September 22, 2014 at 4:50 PM Good one Dorian....I stopped watching the news about a year ago and don't believe I miss anything....hugs Tim Dorian Petersen Potter September 22, 2014 at 5:05 PM I can't blame you for that Tim! Lol... And I even agree with you! Thanks again for all your wonderful and funny comments my friend. Love and light! Hugs! xxxx D.

Jan Allison September 22, 2014 at 4:21 PM LOl when you see all the bad news its no wonder he needed a drink:-) Hugs Jan xx Dorian Petersen Potter September 22, 2014 at 4:37 PM Don't we all! Lol .....thank you Jan! Hugs to you too my friend. xxxx D.