There Was a Time

There was a time when meadows&forests&streams
greeted me each day
and I would find myself bathed in dappled light
but those childhood places are now just a dream
for the years have changed the landscape
and those places are no more
yet, in other places the sun still comes&goes
and birds still sing joyous songs&flowers still sway
to fill my heart with bliss . . . 

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July 17, 2020


Poetry/Verse/There Was a Time
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1268-981-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France

Written for Strand New (11) contest
 sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/23/2020 4:21:00 PM
There is such joy in nature! Your poem expresses this beautifully Constance. Congratulations on your first place win with this lovely gem. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/30/2020 2:42:00 PM
Connie, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 7/23/2020 1:51:00 AM
A lovely write Constance. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/30/2020 2:43:00 PM
Gary, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 7/22/2020 8:02:00 AM
Love this Constance, and why because it takes me back, and takes me to the very places you have written about. Love your dappled light...
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Date: 7/30/2020 2:44:00 PM
Harry,thanks for visiting, sadly I found out the hard way that we can never go back to those dappled places, better to keep the memory and find new dappled places _Constance
Date: 7/21/2020 8:55:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. So true. Landscape changes wiping memories of childhood.Love.
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Date: 7/30/2020 2:45:00 PM
Anisha, thanks for your comment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 7/19/2020 7:36:00 PM
Awesome verse, Constance:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Well done!
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Date: 7/30/2020 2:45:00 PM
Edward, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 7/19/2020 6:08:00 PM
Such a lovely inspirational poem! So soothing! Congratulations on your TOP WIN!
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Date: 7/30/2020 2:46:00 PM
JCB, thanks for the compliment and for the congratulations _Constance
Date: 7/19/2020 1:49:00 PM
- The time that was are precious memories, my friend ... and in the future you will create new memories - Hope everything is well with you, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:39:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for visiting my poem and for commenting, appreciate, I am doing well thank you and hope you are too _Constance
Date: 7/19/2020 10:22:00 AM
beautiful write, my friend. i hope you & Snuggles are doing well x
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:40:00 PM
Jack, thanks for the beautiful, me and the fat, fluffy, adorable, spoiled rotten Snuggles are doing great, nice to hear from you _Constance
Date: 7/18/2020 2:24:00 PM
There was a time and that time is now...Nicely expressed
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:41:00 PM
Arturo, you are right and I am trying very, very hard to live in the moment and let go of the past but it keeps creeping into my life, I have found word search puzzles help distract, sounds silly but it works _Constance
Date: 7/17/2020 1:34:00 PM
You to look harder for them, but they are there. This is lovely. Good luck in the contest. xomo
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Date: 7/17/2020 2:53:00 PM
Pigeon, yes, beautiful places are to be found and really one can never go back to what once was, it just does not work, thanks so much for visiting my poem today, appreciate _Constance
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