Premiere Contest WinnerThere Is No Telling the Things You Might Find

Picking a rose in a garden of Sundays Calling your name on a broken branch wind Looking for clover where weeds are not welcome Walking the bridge till its time to begin Dancing in puddles now filled up with laughter Running through traffic as cars speed away Searching for words in the headlines of morning Writing of moons and the stars on display Collecting my thoughts when I think I will never Painting a smile on a rusted front door Lifting a rock just to see what is under Shopping for clothes in a grocery store Looking through openings cut in the carpet Reaching atop lonely sycamore trees Juggling penguins, now where did that come from Asking a bird what it knows about bees Planting a bush in the depths of the ocean Baking a cake in a rooftop design Sweating the small when the big stuff does happen Thinking of beer when I’d rather have wine Wearing a frown in the moments I’m happy Pushing a cart with a wobbly wheel Lurking in shadows that form on the sunset Dreaming of things that are hopefully real Finding that all I have written is nonsense All of the verses above will now show When all I wanted to say was I love you Like in these stanzas I’ve written below Penning a poem to say what I’m feeling Wishing the phrases will reach to your heart Sending you hints of my steadfast devotion Scribbling fonts that we never shall part All that I am is now all that you make me There is no one that this man could love more You are the girl that I’ve wanted forever Eternally you’ll be the one I adore So there you have it, quite crazy but true Poetic ramblings from deep in my mind Where it is light with some dark in the corners There is no telling the things you might find
11/03/19 The reason I think this poem is Trophy Worthy is it is one of my favorite poems, because it is me. A good amount of fun and nonsense and a lot of beautiful love which is what fuels my pen. I believe my cadence and rhymes are very good and it was a fun poem to write. I think those who read it really enjoyed it because it made them smile and that is usually my goal when writing poetry.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Hello Chris Green, oh yes, this is a good feeling poem. I am making it my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.
Inman Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 1:38 PM
A beautifully sentimental write Chris. A joy to read.
Green Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much James.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:00 PM
Congratulations. A Great Poem And A Great Win........
Green Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much Paula
Mcgee Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Chris, your cadence ad rhymes and things you write poems about are why I love reading your work...this one is so deserving for the first place. I'm blown away in love with it. Many congratulations
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 9:03 AM
Thanks so very much for all of the kindness you show me Jeanne. I appreciate you my friend.
Adams Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 3:23 PM
beautiful poem and so worthy of that gold trophy....love this one my friend...a big congratulations :)
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 9:03 AM
Thank you so very much Sandy. Your smile on my page is always a win for me.
Perrin Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 12:10 PM
It definitely made me smile Chris :-) I LOVE this! A very well deserved win xx
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Thanks so much Elaine. Happy this one brought a smile to you. : )
Roper Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 10:46 AM
A very well deserve win, Chris, congratulations. Hugs eve
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Thank you so very much Eve.
La France Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Chris, congratulations on your deserving Trophy win with this beautiful and excellent write !
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 10:23 AM
gosh, Chris, I had no idea you had such a good amount of fun and nonsense along with your beautiful love! This is a great combo of fun and love. You chose well for the contest as the sponsor seems to really enjoy rhymed poems. I am happy for you that you got a trophy for his one. Congratulations
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Thank you so very much Andrea. This is my first trophy win!!!. : )
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations Chris..
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:59 AM
Thank you Janis.
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations for your great win Chris! :)
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:59 AM
Thank you so much Heidi.
Warrior Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 9:44 AM
Touche! my friend lol...congrats on your marvelous win Chris...^WW^ :o)
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:59 AM
Thanks so much my friend. : )
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Chris.
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:59 AM
Thank you so very much Line.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Hi Chris... I LOVE this. It is so trophy worthy. It truly was so fun and an adventure through your thoughts. I loved the ending too. Bless you always and much love and appreciation for what you do, Gina
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Thank you Gina, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much
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October 6, 2019 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations Chris on your trophy win! I really love this poem, it was fun, flowed nicely, very entertaining and with a nice romantic message at the end! A fav for me!
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Thank you so much Tania. I appreciate you holding the contest, this is my first trophy win that I know of. I am super excited.
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November 12, 2016 at 9:44 AM
I agree w/Robert. A masterpiece. It is a brilliant poem, Chris, it really is. The incongruity of images in and of itself is worthy of this poem being labeled a genius write. You're at the top of your game on this one, my talented friend. Bravo to you. Much love and peace to you.
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November 11, 2016 at 11:19 AM
I absolutely love this, Chris! It's delightful, whimsical, serious, and skillfully written--a favorite! Janice
Green Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Thanks so very much Janice. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 7:40 PM
You never cease to amaze me, Chris. What does go on in your head? "Juggling Penguins!" Hahaha. Love it.
Green Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Hey, you should try it sometime, it's good exercise, those little suckers are heavy. But do it while wearing a tuxedo, it confuses the hell out of them. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Sands Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Such a creative , adventurous , freeing poem! I hope who this is written for will cherish this forever.
Green Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, sometimes my pen will go to the craziest of places. :)
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 5:04 PM
wow I love your nonsensical ramblings - the juggling penguins line grabbed me as I adore these cute animals... I hope this certain person gets to read it Chris:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Thanks so much Jan, juggling penguins is fun and they love it too. :) I appreciate your kind and encouraging thoughts about my poem today.
Chircop Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Oops forgot rating doing it now Sorry..and Sorry no 10 :) .Got stucked with a 7.
Green Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:45 AM
That is no problem at all, if you liked it, that's all that matters to me. I'll take that over ratings any day. :)
Chircop Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:48 PM
I can't add much words...You said it all in extreme beauty..That girl will go speechless..if She had to read these treaded emotions like tresses of kisses so real...A 10+
Chircop Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Oh I read Alexis comment now...We were thinking alike so it seems..Pure females : )
Y. Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:47 PM
Hi Chris, Your nonsense is just beautiful. Where is this girl? I enjoyed this poem of the heart. It was filled with a love that just leaped off the page. Someone needs to find that girl and tell her to read this labor of love. You are an amazing and gifted writer my friend. When I read you it just brightens up my day:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Where is this girl? I thought you said I was writing these poems for you. :) Thanks Alexis, your comments are beautiful and enchanting poetry to me. I always look forward to your visits. Thank you for the smile today.
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