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THERE IS NO GREATER LOVE THAN THIS "For God did not send His Son into the world to condemn the world, but that the world through Him might be saved...-John 3:17 " ----------------------------------------------------------------- "Crucify Him! Crucify Him! CRUCIFY HIM!, the sea of mob uproars yet, my Savior Jesus accused and scorned stood in silence... Trial done. His sentence announced. The Romans flogged him with a flagellum, forty lashes spate on Jesus' arms, shoulders and legs, leaving His body in scarlet rugged ribbons... Battered and Bruised, they threw a robe on His shoulders, Placed a reed to His shaking hands and onto his head, a crown of twisted thorns."Hail, King of the Jews, Hail!", mocked and joked by the kneeling Soldiers to my Savior. After that cruel charade with Sadistic aura, the soldiers spatted Him, tearing His robe. On the dry... sun-kissed road of Via Dolorosa, a more than hundred pounds of cross was tied onto His shoulders. And a fence of insulting people, spitting and laughing, congest on the way. Despite that, My Savior tried to walk erect but due to exhaustion and copious blood loss, He stumbled and fell for three times. The rough wood gouge to His already lacerated skin, bathe in blood and sweats so cold, my Savior moves on... Atop Golgotha... on the rugged wooden cross lies His long white body as four brawny Soldiers came closer with ropes, hammer and nails went to their posts. One drives a wrought iron-nail to His Hands Rending His muscles... veins... nerves and bones.. My Jesus utters a cries same as the slaughtered lamb and Mary, His mother,folded her face to her arms, she groaned as like a lamenting dove. The friction of iron striking iron echoes through. Hammer, hammer, Hammer! The Soldier strokes unto His feet. With His Mother is His favored apostle: John, who mirrors horror and grief. Hands and feet now nailed, they dragged the cross to be dropped in the grounds hole, into His patibulum: “Jesus of Nazareth, King of the Jews”, Knots of relentless throbbing pain shoots left and right over my Savior and all around the thrilled crowd below cheered in Sadistic chorus: "if You are God. We are not afraid of You and we spit at You" but oh! above all these, my suspended Savior on the tree said: “Father, forgive them for they know not what they do.” Tomb silence reign and time passes by in a distressed deafening rhythm as tunnel train of tingles jolts and attacks my Savior's cyanotic body-- crippling chill of death rattles and crumbles my Savior's life All the Maries and the other women weep unto their scarfs as they heard their Dying Master's one last cry: "It is finished...Father, into Your hands I commit My spirit" at 3 o'clock noon that day, the sky marched in salvo of thunderbolts... --------------------------------------------------------------------- "and this is the condemnation, that the light has come into the world, and men loved darkness rather than light, because their deeds were evil... - John 3:19" ______________________________________________________________ 2:48 pm, March 29, 2014

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Date: 4/18/2015 2:09:00 PM
Hi Olive, Congratulation on your win in Isaiah's "Resurrection of Christ" contest. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/5/2015 9:10:00 AM
thank you so much Lollie Linda.. =')
Date: 4/12/2015 4:58:00 PM
Congrats on your well written winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/5/2015 9:07:00 AM
thanks much Sara all for His glory..!
Date: 4/7/2015 7:47:00 PM
Such a descriptive and emotional write about the Passion, Olive. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/5/2015 9:06:00 AM
hugs back Sandra.. thank you so much!!!
Date: 4/7/2015 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful, descriptive, captivating emotional win, and a7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 8/5/2015 9:03:00 AM
thanks much Eve.. =')!
Date: 4/7/2015 3:47:00 PM
dropping back to give my congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:50:00 PM
thank you so much Jan.. :)!
Date: 4/7/2015 2:44:00 PM
A very merited second place, Olive_eloi! Congratulations!:) hugs / paul
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:48:00 PM
thanks much PAul.. :)!
Date: 4/1/2015 6:45:00 AM
Very well put Eloisa...there's no greater love like His!
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Date: 4/25/2015 6:25:00 AM
thanks much Grace.. :)! Stay blessed! :)
Date: 3/31/2015 2:57:00 PM
a deep and raw telling of the passion of Christ, eloi... i felt every moment of the scene through your soul's eyes.. wow.. huggs
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Date: 4/20/2015 7:44:00 AM
thank you so much Nette for your drop by.. always a pleasure to read your comment. :)!
Date: 3/31/2015 1:24:00 AM
Excellent. Very inspiring and touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 4/13/2015 8:22:00 AM
thank you so much.. :) this poem is crated to not only commemorate Jesus death but to emphasize how much our Father above loves us much.. :) God bless us all~olive eloisa
Date: 3/30/2015 7:44:00 PM
Astounding piece of write, dear Olive. A retelling of a story more than two thousand years old. The offense of the cross is hard teaching to the unbelieving people we love. May our prayers be answered. HUgs! Kim :)
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Date: 4/2/2015 11:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim for stopping by and reading my poem.. :)!
Date: 3/29/2015 8:05:00 AM
Although knowing the path that Jesus was taken on by these Roman's, your words through my eyes allowed my screen to become the scene. Another wonderful piece Olive, hugs//James xx
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Date: 4/1/2015 5:29:00 AM
thanks you so much James.. :)! I tried to somehow make this a poem reflection esp as I included verse up.. those two verses above sometimes aren't that much reflected upon.. :) thank you so much for dropping by... :)! warm hugs xxx
Date: 3/29/2015 7:34:00 AM
Brilliant inspiring write - i agree with Paul ideal for Palm Sunday:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/1/2015 4:58:00 AM
Thanks you so much Jan for always visiting my poems.. :) weeee.. :) hugs and hugs.. will make up again.. :)!
Date: 3/29/2015 7:01:00 AM
Excellent and inspiring write, Olive_eloi!! Goes perfectly with today's gospel reading; ideal for Palm Sunday. Have a lovely day; hugs // paul
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Date: 3/30/2015 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Paul. :)! I appreciate you stopping by and leaving your comment as always.. :)!
Date: 3/29/2015 3:14:00 AM
Stunning piece Olive! I greatly enjoyed reading. You describe the happening well. Inspiring words, a fantastic verse! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/29/2015 6:29:00 PM
a pleasure to read your comment Laura.. :) I so appreciate it.. :) i love those verses too.. :) very reflective.. :)

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