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There is a storm brewing and it is in my head, Words are swirling in a mighty roaring wind; Like colourful leaves tumbling and twirling, And then it is raining adjectives and nouns; The dark clouds are sailing across the sky. I try to grasp the words and put them together, Now syllables are cascading from above my head; The metaphors, similes, alliterations at my feet, A whirlwind takes them away as I pick them up; Periods and commas and semi-colons drift by. In my head I am putting a poem together, Stanzas like beautiful wet trees are sparkling; And the wind is blowing, the thunder is booming, My dreams of verse gliding away in the tempest; A violet explosion and a thunderbolt, an idea. Leaf strewn leaves utter a wail like a violin, Oh the sky is painfully dark and angry; I gather all my words to my weeping heart; Holding them like precious gems I love, Then I wake- the birds are singing outside. ______________________________ April 18, 2016 PoetryVerse/There Is A Storm Brewing Copyright Protected, ID 16- 779-037-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Summer Premier Brian Strand Fifth Place _____________________________ A Storm Is Brewing Kelly Deschler Third Place

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Date: 9/18/2017 4:40:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem - delightful composition
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Date: 6/19/2017 9:08:00 AM
Lovely poem, lively metaphors--CONGRATS, Constance! Janice
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Date: 6/19/2017 8:47:00 AM
You have so renacted the act of creation with its frustrations and glories. Congrats on a fine win! Best, Kathy
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Date: 5/17/2016 5:14:00 AM
A 7 Constance! Such an exquisite choice of words you have! Unmatchable! Congrats on your precious win!
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Date: 5/17/2016 1:47:00 AM
This is excellent Constance and so creative! Congratulations on your top win! #7 ;)
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Date: 5/16/2016 7:51:00 PM
Congrats Broken Wings. Nicely done. "Then I wake-the birds are singing outside". If the birds are not worried about the storm, why should we? It's time to fall asleep again. GBU.
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:24:00 AM
Storm of a poet,excellent BW!
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:53:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:42:00 PM
I love your take on the theme, Broken Wings. I can really identify with the emotions you portrayed in your dream! Congratulations on your win for this outstanding poem! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:40:00 PM
I really enjoyed your unique take on the storm theme. It was unexpected and really held my attention... Beautifully done! Congrats on a win!
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Date: 5/8/2016 11:37:00 AM
I loved this piece. Your truely, Carol, and Menagerie.
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Date: 4/22/2016 3:11:00 PM
Nice, unique take on the theme.
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:29:00 PM
james thanks for the visit and the unique
Date: 4/21/2016 12:27:00 PM
Nice depiction of the storm in the heart of a poet Constance....Outstanding ...7 ... All the best for the contest
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:29:00 PM
anand thanks for the outstanding and the 7
Date: 4/18/2016 2:45:00 PM
wow, VERY creative approach. I think this would have made a good pantoum as well! Dang, Constance, I simply could not get around to this one. It just killed me!! I was wanting to do it and it went out of my head Sunday as i was working on a few other poems whose contests did not even fill up yet.
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:26:00 PM
andrea thanks for the wow and the visit
Date: 4/18/2016 1:40:00 PM
This is so unique and lovely!! Hope it does very well in the contest!! :) :)
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:25:00 PM
sneda thanks for the unique and the lovely, I love those words
Date: 4/18/2016 1:12:00 PM
i like the dizzying ramble of your mind; geeat piece, constance.. mine pales in comparison to yours!...huggs
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:24:00 PM
nette thanks so much for visiting and the huggs
Date: 4/18/2016 12:35:00 PM
Great entry B/W, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:24:00 PM
Charlie thanks for visiting and the great
Date: 4/18/2016 9:58:00 AM
Very nicely penned. Best wishes for the contest.7 from me.I like it...............with loves.
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:23:00 PM
mn thanks for visiting and the 7 and love
Date: 4/18/2016 9:41:00 AM
Great take on the storm theme - i can relate to this one when I'm trying to write:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:22:00 PM
jan thanks so much for reading my poem

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