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There Is a Storm Brewing

There is a storm brewing and it is in my head, Words are swirling in a mighty roaring wind; Like colourful leaves tumbling and twirling, And then it is raining adjectives and nouns; The dark clouds are sailing across the sky. I try to grasp the words and put them together, Now syllables are cascading from above my head; The metaphors, similes, alliterations at my feet, A whirlwind takes them away as I pick them up; Periods and commas and semi-colons drift by. In my head I am putting a poem together, Stanzas like beautiful wet trees are sparkling; And the wind is blowing, the thunder is booming, My dreams of verse gliding away in the tempest; A violet explosion and a thunderbolt, an idea. Leaf strewn leaves utter a wail like a violin, Oh the sky is painfully dark and angry; I gather all my words to my weeping heart; Holding them like precious gems I love, Then I wake- the birds are singing outside. ______________________________ April 18, 2016 PoetryVerse/There Is A Storm Brewing Copyright Protected, ID 16- 779-037-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Summer Premier Brian Strand Fifth Place _____________________________ A Storm Is Brewing Kelly Deschler Third Place
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Gauthier Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Enjoyed your poem - delightful composition
Canerdy Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Lovely poem, lively metaphors--CONGRATS, Constance! Janice
Kroll Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 8:47 AM
You have so renacted the act of creation with its frustrations and glories. Congrats on a fine win! Best, Kathy
Cheema Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 5:14 AM
A 7 Constance! Such an exquisite choice of words you have! Unmatchable! Congrats on your precious win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 1:47 AM
This is excellent Constance and so creative! Congratulations on your top win! #7 ;)
Johnson Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 7:51 PM
Congrats Broken Wings. Nicely done. "Then I wake-the birds are singing outside". If the birds are not worried about the storm, why should we? It's time to fall asleep again. GBU.
Chansarkar Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Storm of a poet,excellent BW!
Negron Flores Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:42 PM
I love your take on the theme, Broken Wings. I can really identify with the emotions you portrayed in your dream! Congratulations on your win for this outstanding poem! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Deschler Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:40 PM
I really enjoyed your unique take on the storm theme. It was unexpected and really held my attention... Beautifully done! Congrats on a win!
Eastman Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 11:37 AM
I loved this piece. Your truely, Carol, and Menagerie.
Inman Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Nice, unique take on the theme.
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:29 PM
james thanks for the visit and the unique
Parmale Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Nice depiction of the storm in the heart of a poet Constance....Outstanding ...7 ... All the best for the contest
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:29 PM
anand thanks for the outstanding and the 7
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 2:45 PM
wow, VERY creative approach. I think this would have made a good pantoum as well! Dang, Constance, I simply could not get around to this one. It just killed me!! I was wanting to do it and it went out of my head Sunday as i was working on a few other poems whose contests did not even fill up yet.
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:26 PM
andrea thanks for the wow and the visit
Rv Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:40 PM
This is so unique and lovely!! Hope it does very well in the contest!! :) :)
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:25 PM
sneda thanks for the unique and the lovely, I love those words
Onclaud Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:12 PM
i like the dizzying ramble of your mind; geeat piece, constance.. mine pales in comparison to yours!...huggs
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:24 PM
nette thanks so much for visiting and the huggs
Smith Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Great entry B/W, best wishes in the contest...
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Charlie thanks for visiting and the great
Dalei Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Very nicely penned. Best wishes for the contest.7 from me.I like it...............with loves.
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:23 PM
mn thanks for visiting and the 7 and love
Allison Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Great take on the storm theme - i can relate to this one when I'm trying to write:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:22 PM
jan thanks so much for reading my poem
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