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There Is a Problem

There is a problem in aisle three.
I can't reach the garden peas,
they are on offer.
An elderly man is down.
A handful of helpers, 
all on one knee
as if at prayer.
I cannot get there,
I have to wait,
for the oxygen,
the first responders to
firstly respond.
for the aisle to clear.
I found a piece of 
discounted chicken
while waiting.
He was still breathing
as I reached over
his prone body
for the canned peas.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/21/2019 9:07:00 AM
Wringing out my brain. Great ink.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 10/21/2019 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I am indeed a Saint!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 10/21/2019 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I am indeed a Saint!

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