There Comes a Time

comes a time

old woman sat upright 
in her favourite chair
at attention, somehow waiting.
the window before her seemed to shimmer 
like the magic mirror in sleeping beauty.

what incantations were being cast
across the invisible space between
she and the approaching winter
they had been lovers for all her years.
now it was difficult to tell.

for time unending she had welcomed him
with open arms and open heart
but winter, north of the 49th 
took no prisoners, even for a love
of such long standing.

the winter saw nought but 
flaming red hair and a heat 
that brought him to his knees.
quiet she sat mesmerized
as he shuffled through the leaves 

the exchange was made 
this was not the year ’though
her face had aged
her back was slightly bent
she loved with all her youthful passion
and that was enough for winter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/25/2017 12:14:00 PM
It took me a long time to appreciate winter. Now he'll remind me of you :) xomo
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/25/2017 1:31:00 PM
Oh my, understandable, I wish you warmth. I used to dread the winter, anxiety to the point my legs would shake with the snow. (keep on mind a seasoned bike courier) Now it signals the return of the sun/sanity ebb of SAD.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/25/2017 12:27:00 PM
This year for the first time I am actually afraid of the winter. My physical limitations are such that for the time being I can only enjoy looking out at it. Thank you for such a lovely thought.
Date: 10/24/2017 6:22:00 PM
A very delightfully sensuous poem.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/24/2017 7:02:00 PM
Thank you. I find people feel very strongly about the months they are attached too.
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