There Are Such Men

His body sat there,  in its chair, unmoved, 
but for the whims of those who care an hour
or so, until the time clock sets them free,
yet he has left them long ago, his stare
misleading lesser travelers 
who stand in elevators and in trains and are
quite unaware of their imprisonment
in other chairs less mobile, but much more
confining to the mind.

It is a question, truly,  who may claim
to pity whom, and where the markers are
along the way; of when the watchers are
the watched, of how ideas play upon
the screens before or just behind their eyes.

And do we patronize a liberty
we may not know?  Are there true, wondrous lands
to which the tiny particles within
alone may go? The Steven Hawkings of
the universe depart at will aboard
these spirit ships, invisible in port,
and then upon returning will report
the finding of an India that we
had never seen, or never ever dreamed.
              ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Puddifoot Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 4:23 AM
thanks for explaining, sweetness, I got the gist of the poem, just the last bit threw me a little; yes I know who steven hawking is, I'm not that dense! :-) methinks lots of people make light of what they don't understand...re-reading the last bit a light bulb went on in my mind, I now know exactly what the poem means, it's implying that those who appear physically confined may have a richer internal life than people who are physically able, it's about transcending limitations, am I right?
Ludden Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 8:37 AM
Of course you are.
Ludden Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 4:26 PM
Certainly. Do we make light of something that we do not understand? I'm sure you know who Hawking it. If not, look him up. Does he not reveal things we hadn't imagined? I think so. Amazing fellow, particularly since he has transcended all of his many physical limitations. We should be thankful every day that he has!
Puddifoot Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 3:46 PM
can you explain the final stanza to me please? (yes I know I'm a bit dense) I understood it up until that last bit...you don't wanna explore the area behind my eyes, well not unless you're a shrink, they seem to enjoy 'probing' me lol
Ludden Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Certainly. Do we make light of something that we do not understand? I'm sure you know who Hawking it. If not, look him up. Does he not reveal things we hadn't imagined? I think so. Amazing fellow, particularly since he has transcended all of his many physical limitations. We should be thankful every day that he has!
Ludden Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 3:39 PM
I do, and I do. :-)
Austin Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Yes, there are such men, I agree, and not just from conjecture. "of when the watchers are the watched, of how ideas play upon the screens before or just behind their eyes." That area just behind the eyes is one I've explored in the past, and the findings? If you dare to talk about those to most anyone, you will find yourself talking to yourself. Good stuff, Robert. Love, daver
Ludden Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 3:40 PM
I do, and I do. :-)
Ludden Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 8:50 AM
Thank you!
Falotico Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 8:43 AM
Wondeful piece my friend... well done.. Michael
Ludden Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 8:50 AM
Thank you!
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