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Theory of Greenness

"What do we have for breakfast?" "Lettuce and cabbage juice!" she replies excitedly. She had forced him to change his blue pajamas to green pajamas, then he returns to bed - the bed had to have green sheets, green bed cover, and a green pillow. "Why do you do this to me?!" he asks. "I was born in St. Patrick's Day!!!" she replies. He can't wait for a green light to escape a world where everything he hates is green. He's afraid he's lost her love in the greenness....

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Date: 3/27/2016 5:07:00 PM
Hi Teddy, another excellent write from your pen. Excellent work my friend. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoyed the read Teddy. This one goes in my faves....Vlad.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thank you so much for enjoying and applauding my works, Vlad!!! :-)
Date: 3/27/2016 5:08:00 AM
A great poem indeed. The psychology strikes. Congratulations...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2016 5:05:00 PM
Lol. Thank you so much Probir!!! :-)
Date: 3/27/2016 1:17:00 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your Going Green Win. Stop by my blog "OH NO, OH NO (it's me again) drop a smile if you like :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2016 5:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda!!! Your sweet applauses and blogs keep me going..... *^_^* <3
Date: 3/19/2016 9:24:00 PM
That was very different it caught and jept my attention. Good write
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:35:00 AM
Hi Malcolm. Thank you for enjoying my piece! :-)
Date: 3/19/2016 7:21:00 PM
A most clever and entertaining write!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard! :-)
Date: 3/17/2016 9:18:00 PM
Nicely penned Teddy ...best wishes in the contest
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph! :-)
Date: 3/17/2016 7:05:00 PM
this is wonderful!! Love how you did green in this poem!! the "green light" line was splendid.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:33:00 AM
Thanks for enjoying my work Andrea! :-)
Date: 3/17/2016 3:51:00 PM
Ha ha ha... it's nice my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest, bl
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:30:00 AM
Thanks so much BL! :-)