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Then Pow Whammo

Hello Sweetie, where have you been It's way too long since we cuddled How's bout making up for lost time tonight Make my brain all befuddled I'll make the first move, my love of loves Then you'll show me your feminine guile Remember how it always made me cross my eyes Then I'd become mute for a while Can't wait to experience that feeling again Bet you're still damn good with your digits Howling in unison as we writhe away Screams of exultation were emitted Then POW, WHAMMO, that ultimate feeling Only you, sweet thing, can unleash As we drift off into a night of sheer splendour And dine on a sexual feast © Jack Ellison 2014
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Jones Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 8:24 AM
Cabin fever? Well this long bad winter is good for something..:-) :-) :-)
Ellison Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 8:31 AM
LOL Yup... methinks cabin fever could be it, alright!!! Laughing here... loving hugs, Jack XOX
Manassian Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 3:44 PM
Oh Kenny...There you go again....Yes...must be that you sense spring in the air and that brings out the amorous side in you.
Ellison Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 4:01 PM
It sure ain't spring here yet... a high of 7 degrees today! Yuk! Love Kenny XOX
Eastman Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 9:14 AM
You're testing the limits and single minded like Dragon! But it's Spring... And a Dragon's fancy turns to love. That is unless you're 2 years old. The default here is SHOPPING! And he can shop FOREVER! He needed some new clothes for Easter. The store had them in baby Dragon Pastels! He tried them all on. But I liked the pastel blue. I'm secretly Blinging his name on it. It's so cute! Ordered his Ostrich Easter Eggs early. Bigger is easier for him to hold when he's dying them! Spring! Sigh!
Eastman Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 12:12 PM
A 2 year old baby boy... who hasn't noticed the girls yet...
Ellison Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Hmmm Dragon pastels! Are you sure he's a male guy? LOL Loving hugs to you and your brood! XOXOX
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 8:26 AM
Wow Brother Jack! She sure is a lucky woman :-) Your cyber sister Jan xxx
Ellison Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 8:32 AM
The naughty side of your Bro! LOL Loving hugs, Jack XOX
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