Then Mother Became Mist

She loved her child through rivers and mountains, 
copied sutras with trembling hands, 
offered them at dawn, noon, dusk, and night— 
each tear a stream flowing in silence.

She loved her child across endless miles, 
chanting through tears like mountain rain. 
The wind carried her voice to distant woods, 
cold rain soaking into her soul.

Then Mother became mist, fading in midday sun. 
Then Mother became fragrance, drifting through dreams. 
Then Mother became cloud, white hair at heaven’s edge. 
Then Mother became sunlight, a shadow behind the hill.

At midnight, I turn in a distant town, 
reading the last line of her sutra. 
Her words overflow with longing— 
transcribing the Buddha’s teaching across the river.

O love! A forest of white hair 
flies back to cover birth and death. 
A bird cries from the farthest sky— 
I lift my head, and hear the sound of the Unborn.

--- By Nguyen Giac Phan Tan Hai
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Phan Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:36 AM
Dear Admin: Please correct the title, which was repeated unintentionally. (I am the author of the poem, but I don't know how to delete four words "Then Mother Became Mist" in the title.)
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August 24, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Dear Admin: I did correct the title. Thank you.
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