Then I Can Die

If all I did  was made you feel so real
Among aortas of much needed love
With silky shoulders of stern Pacific layers
Disturbed by memories of wings...

If I defected life and accepted  wrinkles
Of heated rhythm in tempera of love
Although the shyness of a maiden wouldn't vanish
I long to get to know you in your destined life...

If all I did was made you stop and watch me 
Smiling from a frame of wooden Jacaranda wonders
Then I can die forever in immortality of love -
The Anonymous -
                        in the "Wax Museum of 
                                                  the Hoping Souls"...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Situation Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 8:05 PM
this poem spoke to me the words i long to hear. from women my age who did'nt give up on love. women who don't think that i think that they are attractive but they are and if they are single then i am active. beauty is in the eye of the beholder. let me judge if your much too older. let this new sexual revolution begin for the older and senior citizins.
Maverick Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 7:17 AM
I have enjoyed this write, also congratulations on your featured poem Iolanda
Breidenthal Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 7:26 PM
This was quite beautiful...your are a talented poet! Thank you for you kind comment on my poetry! ;) Always, Laura
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 4:08 PM
Beautiful wording, Iolanda. YOu have such an eloquence in your poetry! I just can't catch up here. I am grabbing snatches of time and I am getting more and more behind. I should have started on page two. haha. well, I am off to tutor my lady (she pays my gas money!!) after school. LUv ya, andrea
Zzzzz Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 9:23 AM
A highly inventive and lyrical poem. Very good indeed!
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