Their Love Burned Bright

She eyed him toiling 'round the palace grounds
  He glanced at her, the pace slowed down at times
They knew the love they felt was out of bounds
  They even might be hung for such a crime

No matter how denied, their love burned bright
  They made a sacred vow to see it through
Despite the rules and laws, their love felt right
  The flame inside them danced to life renewed

'Twas at the height of fiery passion pure
   Her father heard of what his daughter'd done
He grew to hate this common worker sure
   Who'd come to mock his daughter and make fun

The standard way to end these kinds of tales
  ~ Kings throw their daughters' lover-boys in jail...

           ...Gendarmes...s'il vous plait...
                           La fin
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Krutsinger Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 11:04 AM
This sonnet is probably in tribute to what actually happened. I am pretty sure the commoner should have been more careful. Nice touch - the Latin at the end.
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Did you mean 'Latin' or 'La fin?' -- Not quite sure. Either way, appreciate your support, Caren. :) gw
Laurie Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 8:08 PM
G'day Gershon … enjoyed your sonnet Gershon, for both the sad love story and easy reading - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 9:40 PM
Glad you liked the story, Lindsay. Appreciate all of your support! :) gw
Rose  Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 2:28 PM
How sad when true love fails because of stubborn laws, I agree, they should run with it, Love the poem,
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 11:18 AM
Indeed, they should (run for it / Love)! Thanks for your feedback, Pixie. Appreciated ~ gw
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