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Their Last Flight

A grand display of. sailing flames; sky-dances at night, beneath moon. Parting the clouds, the journey, a thrill, is the end of these lives. Meteors live long and die hard after their last, grand flight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/27/2015 12:39:00 PM
I like the "sailing flames." Gives the piece movement. My dad and I used to watch the meteor showers from our back yard. Great mysterious fun! Love, daver
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/29/2015 9:45:00 AM
I love watching meteor showers, too. Glad you enjoyed the poem and thanks so much.
Date: 5/25/2015 3:28:00 PM
what a wonderful way to describe meteors!! I love catching up with some of your poems. Let me see one more!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/26/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 5/25/2015 11:27:00 AM
Captured is the grandeur of the heavens. Awe-inspiring lines of joy to my soul.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/26/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/25/2015 9:07:00 AM
ML, often hot air balloons float over my home, they are so loud and so beautiful, you captured the visual wonderfully and thanks for visiting my poem, on broken wings
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/25/2015 9:25:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/25/2015 9:03:00 AM
love the first line and then the last line.. a twist in the end but nice!!!~olive eloisa
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/25/2015 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much.

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