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Their Last Flight

A grand display of. sailing flames; sky-dances at night, beneath moon. Parting the clouds, the journey, a thrill, is the end of these lives. Meteors live long and die hard after their last, grand flight.

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Daver Austin

Date: 5/27/2015 12:39:00 PM

I like the "sailing flames." Gives the piece movement. My dad and I used to watch the meteor showers from our back yard. Great mysterious fun! Love, daver

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/29/2015 9:45:00 AM

I love watching meteor showers, too. Glad you enjoyed the poem and thanks so much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2015 3:28:00 PM

what a wonderful way to describe meteors!! I love catching up with some of your poems. Let me see one more!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/26/2015 9:21:00 AM

Thanks.

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/25/2015 11:27:00 AM

Captured is the grandeur of the heavens. Awe-inspiring lines of joy to my soul.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/26/2015 9:21:00 AM

Thank you.

Constance La France

Date: 5/25/2015 9:07:00 AM

ML, often hot air balloons float over my home, they are so loud and so beautiful, you captured the visual wonderfully and thanks for visiting my poem, on broken wings

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/25/2015 9:25:00 AM

Thank you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/25/2015 9:03:00 AM

love the first line and then the last line.. a twist in the end but nice!!!~olive eloisa

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/25/2015 9:25:00 AM

Thanks so much.