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Their Kids and Ours, Not that We're Comparing

Neighbor's kids, groomed and manicured like a well-kept lawn Greet their parents joyfully smiles, hugs, a beaming ‘Good morn’ Not that we’re jealous, not in the least as we struggle to get ours out of bed By the time they’ve rejected breakfast My wife and I are half-dead… Yet patience, patience, patience wins the day For they will surely grow out of it ~ please God, before we’re old and gray

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Date: 8/19/2024 12:32:00 PM
Put a hedge up between you and the neighbors. Don't compare. Who knows who their kid is. Maybe he's Ted Bundy.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/19/2024 7:59:00 PM
Hmm. Didn't even know of him. Guess John Wayne Gacy and Son of Sam had hardened me forever. ~ J. Dead
Date: 8/19/2024 11:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your write. Love your ending.... Have a wonderful day writing away.........
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/19/2024 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 8/18/2024 9:44:00 PM
This poem for some reason made me think of the kids killed by bombs in war zones versus our own children in safety of USA minus the bullets they must dodge in schools. But I enjoyed reading this however strangely my thoughts jumped!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/19/2024 7:52:00 PM
I don't think your thoughts are so strange at all, Karen. The real reason I've blocked you is... No! Just kidding there. Thanks, gw

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