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Thefierybeast

Once upon a time, there was a beast A fierce creature that loved to feast On the flesh of our wicked kind Its wings set to soar until the end of time The simple exhale of its gentle breath Resulted in flames and to some, death A beast to fear, a beast to flee But also a magnificent sight to see This darling creature fought a horrid war Against armies of men who promised gore It struggled to defeat its own destiny And screamed a fire that burned so brightly It could be seen from galaxies far and wide And that’s how my love got the sparkle in her eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/19/2016 9:31:00 PM
JAMIE, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 10/23/2015 12:14:00 PM
Love the ending! Congrats on this winning poem.
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:10:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write Jamie!
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Date: 10/22/2015 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with your very first submission, Jamie, and a cracker of a poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Regards, Viv
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Date: 10/22/2015 8:19:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!
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Date: 10/22/2015 4:33:00 PM
many congrats on your win Jamie and welcome to soup :-) I was never brave enough to enter contests when I first joined ! :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/22/2015 1:57:00 PM
Jamie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/22/2015 12:52:00 PM
Hi Jamie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2015 2:56:00 AM
- Hello Jamie :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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