The Zone

“Rack’em up,”
   “na, not my thing
I’m about the game”,
     “ it’s chess,
          not checkers.”

Top spin break  
   smack,
  ball spinning through the rack,
two disappear.
Soft bottom right,
    snap gliding left,
kissing the right curve
    just a touch.

Step back,
   walk the table,
stroke it soft
       popping it off the rail,
watching,
   judging,
      surmising.

Back up,
  right flick
with following bottom
for a slow roll.
    Off two rails,
         perfect position,
little draw back.
Reverse bank on the eight
                for emphasis.
Now 
  that’s what I’m talking about,
         “ nice game”,
“Next!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 3:43 PM
Being in the zone.. taking all comers.. when you are in the zone there is no stopping you..I got this piece and the intent.. well done.
Babcock Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 11:44 AM
Great write. God Bless Phyl
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