Viv Wigley Poet Limerick

The Zipper

(my tribute to Limerickmeister Jack Ellison, smile engine extraordinaire)

I remember the time when I caught a
bit of my body parts where I oughtn't a
in much pain did I struggle
with my bits I did juggle
it really did make my eyes water!

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Viv Wigley March 28, 2015 at 10:34 AM Reminds me of a coach trip to Skegness we did in nineteen eighty one- Much beer was consumed, and on the way back Billy Lane needed a toilet break. On an unlit road, miles from anywhere, he relieved himself. On an electric fence.

Lindsay Laurie March 25, 2015 at 1:22 AM G'day Viv... did you have to ask for help Viv? A vision of comedy here. Catch you soon Viv - Lindsay Viv Wigley March 25, 2015 at 3:31 AM No, Laurie, this was a prime example of many hands not making light work. Regards, Viv

Dorian Petersen Potter March 19, 2015 at 4:27 PM Very nice pen Viv! Oh that really hurts. Imagery pretty good in this humorous limerick, it sure made me smile. A 7! Wishing you a lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D Viv Wigley March 19, 2015 at 8:46 PM Thanks, Dorian. Viv x

Jack Ellison March 19, 2015 at 9:38 AM I see you've enrolled in "Limericks 101!" Good on ya! As for your watery eyes, I've been in that situation also! LOL Viv Wigley March 19, 2015 at 8:47 PM With age comes caution. Thanks, Jack. Viv

Paul Callus March 19, 2015 at 5:35 AM I comment with a smile, Viv!! Accidents do happen, and some could be more than just an ouch! // paul

Njeri Hunjeri March 19, 2015 at 2:05 AM Ouch ouch. Nice limerick, that we can lol now