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(my tribute to Limerickmeister Jack Ellison, smile engine extraordinaire) I remember the time when I caught a bit of my body parts where I oughtn't a in much pain did I struggle with my bits I did juggle it really did make my eyes water!

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Date: 3/28/2015 10:34:00 AM
Reminds me of a coach trip to Skegness we did in nineteen eighty one- Much beer was consumed, and on the way back Billy Lane needed a toilet break. On an unlit road, miles from anywhere, he relieved himself. On an electric fence.
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Date: 3/25/2015 1:22:00 AM
G'day Viv... did you have to ask for help Viv? A vision of comedy here. Catch you soon Viv - Lindsay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/25/2015 3:31:00 AM
No, Laurie, this was a prime example of many hands not making light work. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/19/2015 4:27:00 PM
Very nice pen Viv! Oh that really hurts. Imagery pretty good in this humorous limerick, it sure made me smile. A 7! Wishing you a lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/19/2015 8:46:00 PM
Thanks, Dorian. Viv x
Date: 3/19/2015 9:38:00 AM
I see you've enrolled in "Limericks 101!" Good on ya! As for your watery eyes, I've been in that situation also! LOL
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/19/2015 8:47:00 PM
With age comes caution. Thanks, Jack. Viv
Date: 3/19/2015 5:35:00 AM
I comment with a smile, Viv!! Accidents do happen, and some could be more than just an ouch! // paul
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Date: 3/19/2015 2:05:00 AM
Ouch ouch. Nice limerick, that we can lol now
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