The Young Man

Centuries, maybe eons ago
A baby was born into the kingdom's ego
Hands rose to greet the young one with a cheer
As his smile quickened to appear
Welcoming him with warm tenders from all
Greeting him with blessed souls

Now a days the baby's a young man
With daughter and sons holding hands 
Singing so gracefully and cheerfully
With the wind of freedom looking so peacefully
His wife is so beautiful and wise
For she is his light through twisted cries
She's always there beside him
She's his lantern awaiting to vanish the dim

But, a few days ago, the young man got injured
Resulting in a deep wound deep inside
Fright is that he might die
Whilst his kids and wife fight by his side
Yet, his wound bleeds so severely 
With minutes he might pass away
Leaving his kids and wife stranded 
On a lonely night's moonlight

The cure is being mixed 
With hands so blessed
With hope as a main recipe used 
To heal the pain of the wound

I know the young man so well and feel so sad for the loss of his strength
Yet, I shan't mention his name, 
He's from the same country I come from;
From the same white, red, and green
But please do regain your strength...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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