The Young Coquette

What do I call that young coquette? 
My shadow self; my silhouette.
Those clothes, that hair, a cigarette.
The joie de vivre; the vain regret.
What sort of pithy epithet
will she recall, lest I forget?

Perhaps, instead a sobriquet
for who I was back in the day.
But what would she wish to portray?
Somewhat naive, a bit risqué?
A wounded child or power play?
“All that and more!” is what she’d say.

That girl who played a victim game
(though she would make the counter-claim).
A femme fatale; a wild flame.
A spirit not a soul could tame.
Both full of pride and full of shame,
all contradiction just the same.

It all feels now as but a dream,
that martyr of her own regime.
A fog of war; a distant scream.
An echo of one’s disesteem.
A soldier who would self-redeem
and break her shackles at the seam.

Now when she comes to mind I smile,
recalling each and every mile
we marched and fought in rank and file.
We failed, we wailed, we shed the guile
to wake and heal and reconcile
a misspent youth and life worthwhile.


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Loving Iii Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 10:26 AM
I knew that I would make this a closely followed poet. Your work is masterful. You rhyming with forighn phrases. excuse my spelling. There are few that know the real meaning of poetry. And with the first lines from you I know I'll keep you on my Fav list.
Ekechukwu Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 2:18 PM
Well written and how are you Happy new year to you
Greenhough Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 6:46 PM
I saw many people in this poem, though there was really only one. I like the style that has a surprise ending. This resonates because we all have several faces. It's a very good read.
Maverick Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 2:36 PM
How can we know it was misspent if one Cant remember spending it though? This is The type of thought that will keep me up at night Too right..' btw good stuff.!
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March 14, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Excellent poetry that tells a journey... well written..
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