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The You in Me

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The you in me that I know

goes with me where I go --

the you that isn't you at all

comes to me when I recall

the days we spent as we grew.

I never guessed, I never knew,

all that I'd have left of you

would be my thoughts of those two:

of the you in me, the me in you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/13/2016 2:04:00 PM
Cute, Whimsical & now that I think about it --- oh so true :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 12:15:00 PM
Awesome write....
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Date: 6/6/2015 11:37:00 AM
You are a real poet...only a few can keep up with you...two that I know of on Soup...This is tremendous...Thank You
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Date: 5/25/2015 10:21:00 PM
Leo, love the poem. Hope you had a wonderful Memorial Day filled with warmth, pride, and togetherness. love **SKAT**"
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:52:00 AM
Sound poetry like a mid night song scrubbing the mind to peace and comfort. I love everything about this page and a 7 definitely.
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:37:00 PM
this is sweet but also sad. Very sad in fact I really like it, Leo.
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:43:00 AM
I really like this, very insightful and well expressed.
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:51:00 AM
Very moving..links into my life
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Date: 1/19/2015 4:41:00 PM
This is a philosophical truth that should ring true with all of us and our relationships with others. Message is great, flow and rhyme both very smooth. A solid 7 my friend..
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Date: 1/18/2015 5:08:00 PM
:) Sweet! I like this piece. I wonder what the you that isn't you is all about...That part has me intrigued. Thanks for visiting my work and for your kind comment.
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Date: 10/22/2014 7:08:00 AM
nice piece Leo, well penned with good rhyme, well done, have blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 6/4/2014 9:58:00 PM
Oh, Leo, you don't now how this piece really spoke to me, brother. My first love will always be the benchmark by which I compare all love interests. How I miss Danny (Danielle). - Mal
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Date: 5/31/2014 11:06:00 PM
Some never know the joy of feeling like one. You have expressed this beautifully in these few lines. A person can live a lifetime having known love just once and forever keeping those memories dwelling in the heart.
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