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The You

the you are the feelings
the you are the dreaming
the you are the seasons
the you are the changing
the you are the day to night, the night to day
the you are the time to timeless shining ray
the you are the flying dove
the you are only my love


-27/11/19 CTG, BD

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/4/2019 12:51:00 AM

Your loveliness is showing.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/28/2019 5:55:00 PM

Mahtab, This is a write I can feel. And, more importantly, you have shown the heart that feels . Well done my friend. -Richard

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/27/2019 3:08:00 PM

Your you is wonderfully drawn.