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When you walk on by, my heart quivers, freelancing in time with my muse Your light shines a brilliant hue from your eyes, dancing in time with my muse When you stand silently, echoes of laughter unite to remind me Of the moments spent beside you, eager, prancing in time with my muse When you look into my eyes, insight whispers through me, enlightening Sighing out a sense of poise within, enhancing in time with my muse When you whisper to my spirit with your intelligence and beauty Creating feelings of warmth and fire, bechancing in time with my muse When I notice your kindness, there is joy inside that surprises me Breathing a caress across my heart, entrancing in time with my muse When you reach out to my soul with such rich compassion and gentleness Embracing my thoughts with sweet silence, romancing in time with my muse When I clasp your hand within my own, beckoning for your tender hug Your grace, a mystery, reaches through me, glancing in time with my muse When you carry your heart on your sleeve, I feel my own drop to my knees Touching my depths with affection, everlasting in time with my muse Ghazal Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One August 29,2020

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Date: 10/5/2020 11:44:00 AM
Great ghazal here, Regina. I like the repetition of "with my muse" ... it works for so for this form. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 10/3/2020 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the context
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Date: 10/3/2020 11:24:00 AM
Your Gazal (poem) is a lovely piece, Regina! Congratulations on your Top placement in the contest!!
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Date: 10/3/2020 6:00:00 AM
Lovely Gina! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/3/2020 4:55:00 AM
I see what inspires your muse, a good attempt at the ghazal with a good refrain and good rhyme.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/29/2020 3:38:00 PM
This is such a lovely piece . The way you speak it's like everything he does awakens your muse to write lovely words. Really enjoyed this one. God Bless my friend. JB
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Date: 8/29/2020 6:25:00 AM
Regina, Wooahoo! .. Not sure if you had this Ghazal ready to go, it's melodic. So clever to work it out. Excellent result!
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