The Written Face of Love

My love for you I carry in my heart
A growing ache, albeit tender, sweet
For from my body you are miles apart
My words like tender kisses sent to greet

Each letter and each thought with love is tied
Poetic lines immersed in passion’s hue
The secrets of your heart in them confide
My messengers of love sent out to you

Dear heart, be sure to read between the lines
At times a message stronger there you’ll find
Wild fantasies encrypted in these signs
My paradise you’ll enter with your mind

Who dares to doubt the written face of love
Has never flown on words to heights above

For Heather Ober's Favorite Forms Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 14, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Eileen, Congratulations on your win **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 5:10 AM
Could have been none other than u my dear dear sweet Eileen! Congrats on a super awesome poetry n win!
Roper Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 10:02 PM
This poem is so lovely Eileen. Congratulations on your wonderful first placement!
Tor Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 6:43 PM
Congratulations Eileen for a well deserved win!
Y. Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 6:32 PM
Eileen, I enjoyed the message in this well written piece. Excellent job. Congratulations on your win it was deserved:-)Alexis 7
Puddifoot Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 6:27 PM
you have a gift for sonnets, eileen, this one is very well written, and romantic, as only you can do! the subject fits the form so well - congrats on your big win in heather's contest! :)
Nunez Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 4:14 PM
This is so lovely, Eileen! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Beautiful Sonnet of love, Eileen. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Inman Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Lovely write Eileen.
J.T. Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 5:07 PM
This poem is on another level and going into my favorites. Well written.
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:12 PM
WOW! BEST POST! A FAVORITE........... Thanks!
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 3:28 PM
Simply put, Incredible! You did wonderful here! An instant favorite! Thanks!!! MC
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 1:11 PM
Thanks ever so much, MC!!! Lovely visit!
Onclaud Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 1:04 AM
just scintalling without the cumbersome of exposition, eileen... this is what affection is about, yess!..:) huggs
Manassian Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 3:04 AM
Thanks, my dear Nette. Sweet of you
Hendricks Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 9:35 PM
I had to laugh whilst reading this serious write, girlfriend. 'Tis the story of my own sorry life (lol). Like you I too love playing with words and hoping for the real meaning to hit target. Sigh!!! Lovely write, my talented friend. Hugsaroonies to you, Eileen. Licia :-)
Manassian Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 3:06 AM
Thanks, Girlfriend........we do have a LOT in common, I believe. Hugs to you too! :)
Seal Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 6:55 PM
I'm finished reading between the lines my little Desert Orchid, did that before and got slapped lol. Risky business but fantastic poem. Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 3:07 AM
Life without risks is not worth living, Yes? Mr Seal....do persevere....A challenge is good for you, I believe. Thank you for reading my work. Hope the wrists aren't smarting too much! ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 6:51 PM
Beautiful!
Manassian Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 3:07 AM
Thank you, Richard.
Bauer Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 4:52 PM
this is just gorgeous, eileen! bravo!
Manassian Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 2:35 PM
:) Thanks, Ilene. SO nice to see your smiling avatar here at my page!
Anglesey Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 3:41 PM
Absolutely love this. So captivating with each elegant verse. Favorite line, "Wild fantasies encrypted in these signs My paradise you’ll enter with your mind"...Beautiful!
Tacito Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 3:18 PM
This left me with perma-grin! Beautifully stated and declared. "Read between the lines", indeed...
Manassian Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 2:34 PM
PERMA-GRIN! You are so amazing! Thanks every so much, Drake...Yes, between the lines...that's where it's all at! Hugs!
That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 1:25 PM
Lovely and heartfelt poem you have penned here. I enjoyed the sentiments you are conveying. Good job and kudos; thanks for sharing :)
Manassian Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 1:26 PM
:) Lovely to get a visit fro you! I'm honored!
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