The Writer In Me Wants You To Know Premiere Contest Winner

We sit opposite to each other during class. 
I struggle to start.
She sits motionless.
As I look her way I can't help but wonder,
what ideas are swarming in her brain.
A condition known as 'Locked in Syndrome',
has all but controlled her being, but not her brain.
I realize she is getting excited.
Her brain is racing with ideas.
She sees her thoughts as if written on a chalkboard.
She tastes them as though she had taken a bite.
The sounds she hears are deafening.
She wonders if she should put them in print.
Her hands don't move,
nor do her feet.
But those eyes, those big beautiful eyes can tell the story.
She musters up the confidence and sitting in front of her computer, 
writes with her eyes!
The writer in me wants you to know
If she can do this, 
There is no reason I cannot write
a simple poem.

Thursday August 12, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/21/2021 1:50:00 AM
Such a heart-touching write, Virginia, congratulations on trophy win:)
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/21/2021 12:12:00 PM
Thankyou..I was so surprised even though it is what we all hope for when entering a contest.
Date: 8/19/2021 11:03:00 PM
I have come back for another read of your poem, I love your writing style, nothing works greater then your own. I was deeply humbled by your sincerity, on your last comment, bless your beautiful heart. I am always here, if you have questions just soup mail me, xo
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/21/2021 12:13:00 PM
I am sure I will take you up on your offer soon. Been so busy with other things lately. Thankyou again for your kind and encouraging words..
Date: 8/18/2021 1:27:00 PM
superb poetry Virginia, having worked with children with special needs so this really speaks to me:-) hugs Jan xx
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/21/2021 12:14:00 PM
I am so glad you appreciate what I was trying to say. Thankyou so much.
Date: 8/15/2021 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win. Very touched with your poem. BW ~ Mala
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/21/2021 12:15:00 PM
Thankyou so much. I appreciate your input..
Date: 8/15/2021 10:38:00 AM
This is superb Virginia. Cheers - Gary
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/21/2021 12:16:00 PM
such nice and encouraging words...thankyou.
Date: 8/15/2021 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Love your line "There is no reason I cannot write a simple poem." Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 8/15/2021 4:29:00 AM
Thank you for joining my contest. I have picked your poem like a diver picks a pearl from the bottom of the sea. Congratulations from me...
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/15/2021 5:20:00 AM
Thankyou so much. This is very exciting for me and most encouraging. I pray I can improve and venture outside my comfort zone and try other styles of poetry.
Date: 8/15/2021 3:53:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/15/2021 5:22:00 AM
So glad it touched some poetic hearts. Thankyou
Date: 8/15/2021 1:05:00 AM
There is no reason I cannot write a simple poem. - A beautifully developed theme. Congratulations on your win!
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/15/2021 5:23:00 AM
Thankyou. I enjoyed writing this and am quite proud of my win.
Date: 8/12/2021 5:42:00 PM
Wow, really fascinating read; marvelous how technology can help those write who otherwise would be unable. Great read!
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/15/2021 5:28:00 AM
I am quite proud of my first win. I hope to this also encourage others to write. This win just makes me want to get better and better. Thankyou for your wonderful comment.
Date: 8/12/2021 12:07:00 PM
Hello Virginia, oh such a wonderful poem. So go ahead and create your poetry. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/15/2021 10:52:00 AM
Hello Virginia, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 8/15/2021 5:29:00 AM
You are always so encouraging. Thankyou so much.
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