Premiere Contest WinnerThe Writer In Me Wants You To Know

We sit opposite to each other during class. 
I struggle to start.
She sits motionless.
As I look her way I can't help but wonder,
what ideas are swarming in her brain.
A condition known as 'Locked in Syndrome',
has all but controlled her being, but not her brain.
I realize she is getting excited.
Her brain is racing with ideas.
She sees her thoughts as if written on a chalkboard.
She tastes them as though she had taken a bite.
The sounds she hears are deafening.
She wonders if she should put them in print.
Her hands don't move,
nor do her feet.
But those eyes, those big beautiful eyes can tell the story.
She musters up the confidence and sitting in front of her computer, 
writes with her eyes!
The writer in me wants you to know
If she can do this, 
There is no reason I cannot write
a simple poem.

Thursday August 12, 2021
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Daniel Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 1:50 AM
Such a heart-touching write, Virginia, congratulations on trophy win:)
Gelok Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 12:12 PM
Thankyou..I was so surprised even though it is what we all hope for when entering a contest.
Rose  Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 11:03 PM
I have come back for another read of your poem, I love your writing style, nothing works greater then your own. I was deeply humbled by your sincerity, on your last comment, bless your beautiful heart. I am always here, if you have questions just soup mail me, xo
Gelok Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 12:13 PM
I am sure I will take you up on your offer soon. Been so busy with other things lately. Thankyou again for your kind and encouraging words..
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 1:27 PM
superb poetry Virginia, having worked with children with special needs so this really speaks to me:-) hugs Jan xx
Gelok Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 12:14 PM
I am so glad you appreciate what I was trying to say. Thankyou so much.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your top win. Very touched with your poem. BW ~ Mala
Gelok Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Thankyou so much. I appreciate your input..
Radice Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 10:38 AM
This is superb Virginia. Cheers - Gary
Gelok Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 12:16 PM
such nice and encouraging words...thankyou.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Love your line "There is no reason I cannot write a simple poem." Have a blessed day with your win...............
Rose  Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 4:29 AM
Thank you for joining my contest. I have picked your poem like a diver picks a pearl from the bottom of the sea. Congratulations from me...
Gelok Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Thankyou so much. This is very exciting for me and most encouraging. I pray I can improve and venture outside my comfort zone and try other styles of poetry.
Agustin Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 3:53 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Gelok Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 5:22 AM
So glad it touched some poetic hearts. Thankyou
Alex Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 1:05 AM
There is no reason I cannot write a simple poem. - A beautifully developed theme. Congratulations on your win!
Gelok Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Thankyou. I enjoyed writing this and am quite proud of my win.
DiMino Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 5:42 PM
Wow, really fascinating read; marvelous how technology can help those write who otherwise would be unable. Great read!
Gelok Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 5:28 AM
I am quite proud of my first win. I hope to this also encourage others to write. This win just makes me want to get better and better. Thankyou for your wonderful comment.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Hello Virginia, oh such a wonderful poem. So go ahead and create your poetry. enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Hello Virginia, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Gelok Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 5:29 AM
You are always so encouraging. Thankyou so much.
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