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The Writer In Me Wants You To Know

i gaze upon our infinite cosmos ~ self aware but mesmerised i hobble across wild desert sands ~ cast out of eden stigmatised i drift atop blue ocean currents ~ amongst the flotsam unbaptised i clamber inside brittle mountains ~ lost within caves unscrutinised i write before god and god alone ~ unrepentant for having eyes The Writer In Me, Wants You To Know Poetry Contest Sponsored by mystic Rose Rose 03/08/2021 N/A — Still unrepentant for having eyes Syllable counter PS 17/17/17/17/17

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/8/2021 2:36:00 AM

Wonderful. Unrepentant to have eyes, what a concept. Kind wishes, Kai

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/8/2021 4:25:00 AM

Thank you Kai for stopping by, I appreciate you understanding the concept intended, cheers David

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/5/2021 3:57:00 PM

Awesome ink good sir!

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/6/2021 12:29:00 AM

Thank you Mark, I’m delighted you get what I’m trying to say, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/4/2021 1:50:00 PM

And i for 1 David am eternally glad i spy and see that what which you choose to expunge in glorious thoughts and word's unrepentant

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 8/8/2021 3:59:00 PM

David my mate i wrote a poem called The journey of my life thus far Will you check it out please if you get a chance

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 8/4/2021 5:04:00 PM

Exactly David why give you a gift if it was never actually meant to he used. That is a pure waste of a gift

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/4/2021 2:41:00 PM

Thank you Christopher, if something is not adding up what harm can it be to ask questions, how can it offend a creator by asking why they gave me eyes and not to express what I see, or what I don’t see, would it not offend them more not to use the gift that they gave me, if someone can answer that question please tell me, thanks again cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/3/2021 7:16:00 PM

Wonderful writing David, your imagery is stunning, and the wording is above perfect. Your last verse says it all—my very best wishes with the contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/4/2021 12:12:00 AM

Hello Lasaad, Thank you for stopping by to comment, I guess the theme of the contest caught my imagination, the last line may seem strange to some, but you totally get what I’m saying, The reason I see and write is because of the human condition, I ask questions searching for answers, is that to be repented, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2021 5:06:00 PM

wow, GREAT writing, such unique imagery, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/4/2021 12:00:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, started off hoping fo 3 monokus and managed to get 5, I never know once I get started writing, how far or where it will go, if anywhere at all, part of the enjoyment I guess, cheers David