Debbie Guzzi Poet Free verse

The Write of You

Inspired by the write of you
creamed through a paper sieve to cup
with both hands the leavings that you trail
 the write of you

like the chewed edge of hand pressed paper
like the apostrophe of lash on the cheeky page
I ogle the syncopated semen-antic drop of
 the write of you

how often does the wonder of you flash
across the film of my eyes unable reach
for I am so enchanted with the coffee-au-lait
 write of you

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Funom Makama March 23, 2013 at 9:20 AM beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

Ingrid Showalter Swift January 17, 2013 at 9:41 AM ABSOLUTELY ADORE this one...and know exactly how you felt in the writing of it...the thrill of the great write the whispers of a soul that just somehow knows where you live in everything they ever pen...romance inked

Carl Fraser November 24, 2012 at 2:26 PM This is a very creative write Debbie with great depth, love it, blessings Carl

Harry Horsman November 23, 2012 at 8:00 AM this is so classical Debbie, just so nice to know you and your wonderful poetry... Harry Horsman November 23, 2012 at 8:01 AM and i grew believing that intellect had no heart, boy was i wrong

Ralph Mason November 23, 2012 at 7:13 AM this is really good! One of the best I've read on the soup. Warm thoughts, Ralph

Don Johnson November 22, 2012 at 10:31 PM Yes, great poem here Deb...

Sara Kendrick November 22, 2012 at 5:34 PM Very expressive work honoring Mr. O..I am sure that he will be pleased..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Michelle Mac Donald November 22, 2012 at 9:41 AM I'm sure he will feel honoured by dedication, Debs! Sweet, sultry and sexy imagey. Will have to read his "Montage on White". Hope you will have a super Thanksgiving.:)) Love, Mikki

Joe Maverick November 22, 2012 at 8:40 AM Quite a honour for Mr O here Debbie, Also wishing you a very happy Thanksgiving..I think its a great Instution for you to cherish.."

Terrell Martin November 22, 2012 at 8:09 AM I love anything that smacks of sex, writing and film (photography) all in one little happy poem): Interesting, lovely, strange, weird, uplifting "Write." And Happy Happy Gobble Day:)

Wilma Neels November 22, 2012 at 6:58 AM Hey Debbie, I enjoyed taking time of work and reading this gem! Happy Thanksgiving to you :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 22, 2012 at 6:32 AM Nice one Debbie you are quite cool aren't you xx

Ravindra K Kapoor November 22, 2012 at 4:53 AM While reading your amazing write I could not resist checking the beautiful Poem of Ruben O. Thank you for both these wonderful writes and Thank you for all your wonderful comments on my Poems. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra..D. Guzzi

Yanny Widjanarko November 21, 2012 at 7:07 PM Beautiful write of you Debbie, this is really inspiring :) - hug, yanny

Mohammad Yamin November 21, 2012 at 7:03 PM An amazing write - a beautiful expression and imagery. I am impressed by your poem Debbie -Mohammad

Russell Sivey November 21, 2012 at 3:39 PM Beautiful and awe inspiring write here Debbie! I sure enjoyed reading this poem this evening! What a delightful piece, I hope you have a great thanksgiving my friend, Great Work!!