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The Wraith of Gallows Hill

Walked a wooded trail, suddenly unsure of my surroundings, wondered had I'd become lost.. only a moment disconcerted, as dusk grew nearer. I went over an old river crossed by an even older bridge, there not seen and yet to see a small child oddity. for no town or village folk walked alone on so cold a day. Just as I chose to wave and hail a hearty hello a calm little sound, uttered from within the vicinity, albeit echoed... "Gallows now covered in hoarfrost and rime.. scarce to hear angel's plea as guilty beg. Ever flawless, never just as in Time, though Adam's rib, borrowed as spindly leg." What my ears heard my head denied in meaning, such a strange thing for a child to utter. She turned toward the foot of the bridge I plied, wondered at what trick, my eye deceived. The girl grew faintly scintillating with lack of substance in the gloomy air as a mist or fume of smoke. Aghast., I stood on trembling legs akin to the variety.. she had so oddly fashioned in her sing songy discord. Now spirit of another world, would ask to let me pass by. with pleasure would grant your path ease.,if you were same as I.. Plain to those of us in mortal realm, where feet grow tired and cold yet still leave footsteps along the path I've found. Your feet, as much can be described, bare and unfeeling of the shadowy damp.. and don't quite reach the ground. And with this further insult meant as challenge the wraith like apparation vanished. Couldn't move quickly enough through rows of hedges and over fences til my feet found the common road at last.. I could still faintly hear a child's sing songy echo in voice.. "Gallows now covered in hoarfrost and rime.. scarce to hear angel's plea as guilty beg. Ever flawless, never just as in Time, though Adam's rib, borrowed as spindly leg."
Happy All Hallows' Eve

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Date: 11/7/2020 11:28:00 AM
What a great line within your refrain: though Adam's rib, borrowed as spindly leg
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2020 8:44:00 PM
I enjoyed translating...lol
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 11/8/2020 5:13:00 PM
Kim, I was going to reply in the beautiful language of the Greeks. But the message kept getting lost in traslation. -R
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2020 5:20:00 AM
Interesting that you chose to write this in Finnish. Why so harsh?
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 11/7/2020 7:00:00 PM
Hi Kim, Vanha testamentti kertoi langenneista enkeleistä, joille ihmisten tavoin annettiin vapaa tahto. Aatamin kylkiluuta käytettiin ehkä Luojan luomisen vastenmielisenä jumalallisena lääkkeenä hänen yksinäisyydelleen. Korjauskeino löydettiin Eevasta. -Richard
Date: 11/3/2020 7:22:00 AM
Great how these apps can translate into many languages, thought at first you spoke many languages until I read through the comments and replies, I enjoyed your different approach to replying to your fellow poets. My fave is french but not fluent, but my spoken Greek is. Was your poem with Halloween in mind. Reminded me of the film poltergeist - excellent write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 11/5/2020 7:23:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, Chairetísmata. To festivál ton ghouls synantíthike. Kai i néa méra ítan gia tous timoménous nekroús mas. -Richard
Date: 10/26/2020 12:23:00 AM
Definitely a dramatic, captivating and entertaining narration, Richard. Perfect for this time of year! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/28/2020 8:05:00 AM
Spot on Paul...! I love my translator app. -Richard
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/28/2020 4:01:00 AM
This sounds Luxembourgish to me, Richard:) Halloween is mostly for the young! Regards // paul
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 10/27/2020 8:12:00 AM
Paul, Merci fir Äre Kommentar. Ech hunn den Dag als Kand gär, awer méi méi al ginn ech. Schéint Halloween! -Richard.
Date: 10/24/2020 5:35:00 AM
Dwelling in spirits of another world--aptly so for the season, Richard. You spun a great scary story my friend.
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Date: 10/27/2020 8:10:00 AM
Vijay, Tapadh leibh airson a ’bheachd sin. Ged is dòcha gu bheil an latha air cuid den ath-thagradh tràth aige a chall tha sinn fhathast a ’co-roinn ann a bhith a’ toirt urram do spioradan saoghal eile. Oidhche Shamhna shona dhut! -Richard.
Date: 10/23/2020 1:55:00 PM
Gave me goosebumps, especially the chant of the ghost like child~
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 10/27/2020 7:52:00 AM
Michelle, Vielen Dank für den gespenstischen Kommentar Gänsehaut ist gut .. bedeutet, dass Sie noch am Leben sind. Fröhliches Halloween! -Richard
Date: 10/18/2020 9:23:00 PM
I found this captivating enchanting and surreal... Take care... Shirley
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Date: 10/27/2020 7:50:00 AM
Shirley, Me encantó el error administrativo. Nunca conocí a una Shirley que no me gustara, gracias por ese encantador comentario. ¡Feliz Halloween! -Richard
Date: 10/15/2020 6:04:00 PM
I agree with Linda. Creepy came to my mind. Good and CREEPY!!! Happy Halloween!
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Date: 10/27/2020 7:44:00 AM
Andrea, Merci pour ce gentil commentaire. Joyeux Halloween! -Richard
Date: 10/12/2020 6:22:00 AM
Beautifully penned and creepily received! Many thanks for sharing! Linda
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Date: 10/27/2020 7:43:00 AM
Linda, Thank you for the comment. Happy Halloween! -Richard

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