The Wraith

Before the dawn whirling in a grim dream, conception of a haunting howling scream, through slivered moon's eclipse casting a gloom. Beasts wandering eyes of red are agleam shadows amble beyond a massive tomb. A wraith in gossamer veils of blackness walks a dark and dismal path of badness stretching its tendrils over the ghost house threshold of cold disembodied madness. Piteous cries of pain attempt to rouse the passion within the wraith coal shadow. Peering piercing the night like an arrow, lips curling back over its bloodstained fangs. Encroaching blackness savoring sorrow as demon's fade away as despair hangs 9/26/2017
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La France Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 6:58 AM
Eve , wow, dark and beautiful, CONGRATULATIONS!
Haight Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 2:09 PM
Such an amazing, dark poem, Eve. Congratulations on your First Place Win! Hugs, Sandra
Barden Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 11:02 PM
Wonderfully dark and descriptive, Eve - congrats on your win! :-)
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve I knew she would love this one:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Congrats on your win Eve
Gondolf Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Congrats, Eve, great poem!
Scars Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 6:00 AM
wow, I was so impressed with this poem sweet Eve! thank you and congrats :)
Dutta Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 1:38 PM
Masterpiece!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 8:20 PM
Good job Eve and best wishes for the contest.
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 5:37 AM
Great poem Eve! Flows so very naturally
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:49 AM
Well written, well executed rhyme poem--best for a win!
Sivey Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:24 AM
Wow Eve, I am impressed you have written such a Dark write! I surely loved reading your amazing poem here this morning! This was a fun poem to read, I love poetry like this, to stimulate the mind in Halloween mode! Great Work!!
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 3:09 AM
Love this dark descriptive write Eve it sent a chill down my spine:-) hugs jan xx
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