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The Worst Morning Ever

One morning when I am dreaming My two brothers are beaming the flashing lights It looks like day in my room My room was also as loud as a concert The radio was talk like never before BOOM! I wake up like a bome wet off I ask them to turn it off then they didn’t So the told my dad and he her it and they got in trouble Then when I was going back to beb an my alarme went off then i had to go to school This was the worst morning ever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/16/2008 2:33:00 PM
I like your explanation in this piece regarding the worst morning ever. I am able to see the images as the poem moved along. There will be better days in the future; therefore, turn the alarm down low and just let things go. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/29/2008 11:28:00 AM
Great start Darren. You have interesting rhythm for a 12-year old! Can't wait to see what you come up with in a few years!
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Date: 9/24/2008 9:18:00 PM
yes I agree with Stephanie start over, but don't give up. read poetry, study it, write it over and over, write what you feel and see, but don't stop writting poetry. We are suppose to be here to encourage one another so keep posting.
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Date: 9/24/2008 7:57:00 PM
sibling fun! don't worry, someday you wont remember this as badly, in fact you'll miss this with nostalgia.
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