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The Worst Morning After

The one time when I tried Southern Comfort Was in a drinking game or something of the sort I remember my right eye wouldn't open My temples were pounding like a drum All I could see was red So I reached for my head Then I realized I had no hair Reeling, I crawled for the mirror When I found the bathroom, I grabbed the sink I pulled myself up to see letters in black ink My forehead was throbbing so bad I focused to read what it said I'm pretty sure I screamed something out loud It said "DRUNK ASS - YOU PASSED OUT'

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Poet. Undertaker

Date: 8/5/2013 10:21:00 AM

great. Congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2013 1:48:00 AM

I see you won. YES!!! Congratulations.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/2/2013 10:17:00 AM

Hahaha. I knew you'd win the contest with this gem. Congratulations, my friend. Licia :-)

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 8/2/2013 6:50:00 AM

This is fantastic! I enjoyed reading it.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/2/2013 4:26:00 AM

nights of youth lol super poem congrats on win Shadow smiles

Skat A

Date: 8/1/2013 11:03:00 PM

Congrats... :-) SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/1/2013 9:58:00 PM

You rock Mitch,, congratulations in Susan's "Worst Morning After..." contest. take care. xox~ LINDA ....

Steven Mitchell

Date: 7/30/2013 5:52:00 AM

ah i stumbled across the competetion! nice one Mitch and good luck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 12:11:00 AM

haha, I've heard about this kind of thing. ARe you just imagining or did this happen to you?

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 7/25/2013 8:58:00 AM

Nice poem , best of luck for the contest. *smiles* Ron

Christine Phillips

Date: 7/25/2013 6:19:00 AM

A nice humorous poem. Good story for all those who would like to know what the after effect of having too much to drink is.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 7/24/2013 12:27:00 PM

Hahaha, you drunken sod, you!!! You must have felt like you'd been in a train crash. NIce one, MItch. If this is for the competition, good luck to you, my friend. PS - I think you'd enjoy my "On the rocks". Cheers, pal. Licia :-)