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The Worm and the Apple

There once was a worm who lived in an Apple, he lived there, and quite comfortably. He found dirt deplorable, but Apples, adorable! The rent was affordable, and cheap! There once was a worm who lived in an Apple, he lived there and never came out. "This is my Apple coreable, nothing I love moreable, life outside's ignorable!" he'd pout. There once was a worm who lived in an Apple, he lived there and liked it just fine. Sometimes, rain would pourable, with great thunderstormables, and when the wind roarabled, he'd hide! There once was a worm who lived in an Apple, he lived there, but one sunny dawn. He noticed the floorable, which looked nice beforeable, had become deformabled, with rot! There once was a worm who lived in an Apple, he lived there, but was forced to leave. And how he complained a lot, till he saw an apricot, and he did proclaim this thought; "It is now that I see; -that he who lives only inside his own head, finds it is a small world indeed"!

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Date: 11/12/2010 2:33:00 PM
Witty and entertaning write ! Has a sagacity about it that's undeniable. great write ! And congratulations making it to the next round ! much love, james
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest David. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week David. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:53:00 AM
That was whimsicle and cute yet very philisophical and true. What a treat it was to read. Thank you sincerly Bobb Marly
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Date: 12/22/2009 1:13:00 PM
certainly is horrid to just live inside one's own head, great poem! :)
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Date: 10/21/2009 3:08:00 AM
David, Congratulations, on your placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. I hope you are basking in the glory! You deserve it. This well written poem contains MUCH wisdom. Excellent write. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/19/2009 9:41:00 AM
delightful poem. Congratulations on your win. Krista Kurth
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Date: 10/19/2009 3:03:00 AM
Very clever and creative piece with a great life lesson entwined. Congratulations on your win. Lainie
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Date: 10/15/2009 12:39:00 PM
David, congratulations on being one of the winners in the June Poetry Soup contest. Way to go!! I hope you are enjoying your honor. Karen
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Date: 10/14/2009 11:27:00 AM
Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James
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Date: 10/14/2009 3:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup David. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/13/2009 10:24:00 PM
><>~ Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><
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Date: 10/13/2009 8:07:00 PM
David wonderfully whimsical and philosophical. Congratulations on placing.
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Date: 10/13/2009 7:32:00 PM
Hi David, Just wanted to wish you congratulations for your poem winning in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/29/2009 12:03:00 PM
David, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:12:00 PM
I like the message at the end. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:56:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals David. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:46:00 PM
David, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:28:00 PM
This is a great poem for all ages. I think this is the perfect poem to get young people to appreciate writing and enjoy poetry. Brilliant! Congratulations on getting featured!
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week David >>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 6:57:00 AM
This was excellent, David. Very creative throughout. I love the words you invent ( I think my favorite is "thunderstormables"). It took me a second to catch what was going on at first, but when I got on, I couldn't help but laugh. Again, great job, and congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 9/21/2009 6:31:00 AM
Congrats on your poetry being featured this week… please keep writing… great you David! Adeleke
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week David. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2009 11:25:00 PM
Such a fun poem to read. Good write.
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