The Worm and the Apple

There once was a worm who lived in an Apple,
he lived there, and quite comfortably.
He found dirt deplorable,
but Apples, adorable!
The rent was affordable,
and cheap!

There once was a worm who lived in an Apple,
he lived there and never came out.
"This is my Apple coreable,
nothing I love moreable,
life outside's ignorable!"
he'd pout.

There once was a worm who lived in an Apple,
he lived there and liked it just fine.
Sometimes, rain would pourable,
with great thunderstormables,
and when the wind roarabled,
he'd hide!

There once was a worm who lived in an Apple,
he lived there, but one sunny dawn.
He noticed the floorable,
which looked nice beforeable,
had become deformabled,
with rot!

There once was a worm who lived in an Apple,
he lived there, but was forced to leave.
And how he complained a lot,
till he saw an apricot,
and he did proclaim this thought;
"It is now that I see;

-that he who lives only inside his own head,
finds it is a small world indeed"!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Peranteau Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 2:33 PM
Witty and entertaning write ! Has a sagacity about it that's undeniable. great write ! And congratulations making it to the next round ! much love, james
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November 10, 2010 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest David. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week David. Love, Carol
Boyd Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 9:53 AM
That was whimsicle and cute yet very philisophical and true. What a treat it was to read. Thank you sincerly Bobb Marly
Lacey Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 1:13 PM
certainly is horrid to just live inside one's own head, great poem! :)
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October 21, 2009 at 3:08 AM
David, Congratulations, on your placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. I hope you are basking in the glory! You deserve it. This well written poem contains MUCH wisdom. Excellent write. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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October 19, 2009 at 9:41 AM
delightful poem. Congratulations on your win. Krista Kurth
George   Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 3:03 AM
Very clever and creative piece with a great life lesson entwined. Congratulations on your win. Lainie
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October 15, 2009 at 12:39 PM
David, congratulations on being one of the winners in the June Poetry Soup contest. Way to go!! I hope you are enjoying your honor. Karen
Fraser Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 11:27 AM
Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James
Brown Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 3:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup David. Love,Carol
Fish Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 10:24 PM
><>~ Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><
Pate Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:07 PM
David wonderfully whimsical and philosophical. Congratulations on placing.
Sheart Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 7:32 PM
Hi David, Just wanted to wish you congratulations for your poem winning in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia
Moreno Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:03 PM
David, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 3:12 PM
I like the message at the end. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Sheart Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 2:56 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals David. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 7:46 PM
David, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
Augustus Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 3:28 PM
This is a great poem for all ages. I think this is the perfect poem to get young people to appreciate writing and enjoy poetry. Brilliant! Congratulations on getting featured!
Fraser Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 6:29 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week David >>James
Taylor Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 6:57 AM
This was excellent, David. Very creative throughout. I love the words you invent ( I think my favorite is "thunderstormables"). It took me a second to catch what was going on at first, but when I got on, I couldn't help but laugh. Again, great job, and congratulations on being featured this week.
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September 21, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Congrats on your poetry being featured this week… please keep writing… great you David! Adeleke
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September 21, 2009 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week David. Love, Carol
Parish Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 11:25 PM
Such a fun poem to read. Good write.
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