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The World We Live In

A Bewildering Catastrophe, Disastrously Expanding, Falsely Guides Hereby In Joining Killers Living Maliciously, Nefariously, Often Painfully, Questionably Regarding Sadistic Tenants, Unimpeachably Venomous, With Xenophobia, Yearning Zeal

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2010 12:56:00 PM

Belated congrats on your HM with this difficult challenge! LUv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/17/2010 5:48:00 PM

enjoyed, congrats on the win!

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/10/2010 1:02:00 PM

good poem guy and we are both hoonorable metions. joining killers living maliciously. you are good! congrats!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/4/2010 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Deborah's contest James. Love,Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/3/2010 3:58:00 AM

Congratulations James D., on your Honorable Mention in Deborah Guzzi’s, “Do You Know Your ABC’s?” contest with this creative poem. It's easy to see why you placed. Lovingly, Dane Ann

James Fraser

Date: 2/2/2010 1:08:00 PM

Sadly this is the world we live in James, many congratulations on your win in Deborah's fine contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2010 6:51:00 PM

Congrats James on your winning poem in the ABC contest.. a fantastic write and a well deserved win... great words and content... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/5/2010 11:18:00 AM

Nice job.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/31/2009 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2009 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week James. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 12/28/2009 3:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2009 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals James. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 12/21/2009 10:22:00 PM

Dear JamesCongratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie ,

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 8:35:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 9:51:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Elaine George

Date: 10/22/2009 5:15:00 PM

Wow!! Incredible ABC poem James. Thanks for sharing. Lainie

Ld King

Date: 10/19/2009 2:02:00 PM

Congratulations to you James on your poem being featured this week You've finally gained the recognition that you probably didn't seek If you're like me you wrote your poem because your heart had something to say You thanked us for reading by writing good words, accept thanks in return today

James Fraser

Date: 10/19/2009 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James

Sue Mason

Date: 10/19/2009 9:43:00 AM

Yeah, Yeah, Yeah you really nailed it here, James and what a fun form of poetry this is! Challenging and this one is exceptional. ABC's and Acrostics are two of my favorites and I've only learned about them here at the Soup ... smile ... congratulations on your wonderful writing being featured this week!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/18/2009 5:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol

Jay Smith

Date: 10/5/2009 2:05:00 PM

This poem identifies how sadism and insanity exists in, as the title suggests, the world we live in. It reveals that while someone may not know anything other than the evil deeds they commit, they may still question others with the same goals as themselves. It also distinguishes the fear of things not known and the striving for happiness with disregard for the cost. The morale here is that everyone, no matter how sick or evil, has emotions.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2009 1:58:00 PM

Sad that is what can be said of the human race. Keep writing. Sara