The World of Shadow

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My shadow creeps after me- It stays and stays On sunny days. It does things with Other shadows. My shadow sniffs a Black flower. It looks upon a Black bird. The world of shadow Is strange, Lovely, and fun. In fact, Everything has a shadow But the sun!

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/9/2019 3:21:00 AM

This is darling! The sun has no shadow? I have never thought of it. Unique idea.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/9/2019 11:38:00 AM

Thank you very much, Caren. I guess if the sun had a shadow, then it wouldn't be the sun. :)

Na Na

Date: 12/9/2019 1:02:00 AM

Wonderful poem Evelyn. I love reading your poems. Thanks for sharing this. Wait till you see my 2 newest shape poems. I spent 1 hour 30 mins on the 1st one and 30 minutes on my last one.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/9/2019 11:35:00 AM

You're welcome, Greg, and thank you for your comment. I love reading your poems, too, and I deeply enjoyed your two latest shape poems. They are awesome!