The Works Canteen

Across by the window, reading her magazine
There she sat.
Eating her breakfast in the works canteen,
Drinking latte

Coffee, eating toast and marmalade, her mind
Deep in thought
So it seemed to me. Yes, you would often find
Her there if sought.

Her hair fair and long, her lips rouge and pert,
Wearing a short skirt
And so many men teased by her smile, hurt
By this sensual flirt,

Because such beauty was rare, not often seen
In the works canteen.
And with every other lass she stole the scene
This irresistible colleen.

Then he entered and her eyes lit as she sipped
Her latte coffee
And gently fondled her cup topped with whipped
Cream as he

Sat down opposite her and smiled. Her emerald
Eyes and seductive pose
Enticed him so, for he had heard tales of old told
Of this lipstick rose.

But like most men in the canteen he couldn't resist
This young colleen
So he too surrendered to her beauty and this tryst
In the works canteen.

And across by the window, reading her magazine
There she sat,
Eating lunch in the works canteen.
Drinking latte

Coffee, eating pasta and rice, her mind
Deep in thought
So it seemed to me. Yes, you would often find
Her there if sought.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 27, 2015 at 1:42 AM
EdwardJ, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
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June 27, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Hi Skat, thanks. An honour to have it so. Edward
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May 13, 2015 at 12:22 PM
To admire someone from a far. Edward, I enjoyed your first poem on the soup, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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May 13, 2015 at 12:55 PM
Hi Linda, that's very kind of you, much appreciated. I in turn will look at your poetry as we are all different and can be inspired by all. I learned a few days ago that one should title a poem at the end in order to see where the poem takes you. Every poem I have ever written I have always started with the title so not too sure what difference it makes but will give it a go. I live in Cumbria, England. I presume you live miles and miles away!! Eddie
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May 13, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Hi Edward J, I have a question for you. Since your comment on one of my latest poems grabbed my full attention. How did you find or hear about this site? :) Answer if you'd like. I'd like to read another one of your poems. This one has a sweet crush tide... SKAT
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May 14, 2015 at 3:47 PM
Hi Skat, I have had a message from a Isabelle Glory and I checked her out to see if she has any poems and she has none posted. She wants me to email her. Have you heard of her at all. Kind regards, Eddie
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May 13, 2015 at 12:51 PM
Hi Skat. I use to belong to another site and felt it was all about egos which is easy to fall into the trap of. A few years ago I belonged to a really good poetry web site called Poetry Retreat which was hacked into believe it or not and the site closed. I surfed the net and found poetry soup and thought I'd give it a go. I write with different styles and if you look carefully, you will see little things like couplets etc and a play on words. I like your wording Skat so will read more of your poems to see your styles too. By the way, you can call me Eddie or by my poet name PIM.
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May 12, 2015 at 2:11 PM
Edwardj. Thank you for sharing, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 12, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Hi Skat, thanks for your invite, one which I accept. I started writing poetry about 10 years ago, entering a competition for which I won the Editors Choice Award though I am sceptical of awards as just how good or bad is a poet. I hail from Essex, married with a son who is 30 and now live in Cumbria. Am working at present for a charity part time. What about you? Kind regards Eddie
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May 10, 2015 at 6:31 PM
hi Edward and welcome to Soup enjoyed your 1st poem keep them coming hugs 7
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May 12, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Hi Shadow, thanks for your comment. So how are you and how did you become a poet. Eddie
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