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I've lived in it all my life - the self's grand fiction - refuge for the child, youths rebel fortress and a walled cloister to house the holy relics gathered on the pilgrimages of my mind. I have built it line by line with words baked into bricks. Rooms follow years down passageways of books, dusty manuscripts and dreams hung in stations along age blackened walls. In high towers, windows open to a universe with a terrifying silence at its core. I hear reality's hard fist knocking at the door, a presence breathing its corrosive damp into mortar, unpicking me brick by brick. And yet, a sense of peace in surrendering what was never really there, dissolving into what is

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Date: 10/7/2023 5:58:00 AM
High praise from Dilly. You have a unique voice, a sign of a true poet
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/17/2023 12:03:00 AM
Thanks Tom...very much appreciate your comments. Regards
Date: 10/7/2023 5:06:00 AM
My reaction is a hellish cry Paul... all the somethings into nothings that actually are the everythings - some moments of realisation, revelation - knowing yet unknowing within a blink. Your poetry is beautiful - written in a voice I'd trust to tell me it'll be ok and the poem leads by the hand to say (to my interpretation) whatever will be, will be ok. Love it. Faving as acceptable as highest form of praise available but actually I rate you beyond that obviously
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/17/2023 12:02:00 AM
Many thanks DD for your kind and considered words...they are a light in the dark and are treasured.

Book: Shattered Sighs