The Wooden Floor and the Wet Summer Night

The wooden floor creaked as I lay on it.
My eyes narrowed, slowly, into slits
As I stared at the half-drawn blinds,
As my limbs, lazily
Throbbed with dull persistency
After the long,
Enervating bus journey.


Not much had changed over the years.
The same wooden houses and paddy fields;
Farmers toiling, indefatigably.
Children playing with perpetual felicity.
The village still was as I had known
Six years ago.


The sweet smell of the incense sticks
From the tiny shrine
 In the damp alcove
Filled my little room .
Mingled ,gently with the wooden floor.


Not much had changed over the years.
The same wooden houses and paddy fields;
Farmers toiling, indefatigably.
Children playing with perpetual felicity.
The village still was as I had known
Six years ago.


Like every night, the flautist did come.
Beside the same gnarled tree, he seated himself.
Under the lunar spotlight, he rose
Far beyond the temporal world.
The ineffable melody and its ungodly pulchritude 
In esoteric harmony with the quietude
Accompanied the miners
In their lonesome journey
Back home.

Not much had changed over the years.
The village still was as I had known
Six years ago.
-	Amy Angom (16)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 4:35 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 6:56 PM
What a lovely flow ~ totally charming
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 1:50 PM
amy, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 2:01 PM
AMY, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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