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The Wonder of You

At first I thought you were just being nice To make a good impression on a first date. "Her true self needs time to break the ice," I thought as we talked until it was late. I saw you again, but you were still the same— Uncommonly gracious, loving, kindly spoken. "She’s not being real, playing the same game." I was quite certain I was seeing only a token. But additional encounters proved me wrong. You were as fetching and fabulous as before. "This lady is a treasure; she sings a true song." Hence, fond feelings for you I couldn’t ignore. I worried if I were worthy to seek your hand. You had character smiles out of my reach. "Face it, fool, for you she’s simply too grand." I saw myself as a crabapple, you as a peach. But there came a day when I had to do it Lest another suitor claim you as his bride. "Have I the courage, the charm and the wit?" Perhaps not, but I must know that I tried. Decades have passed with you as my Sweet. It may seem impossible, but I pledge it’s true. "She continues to take me off my feet." And that, my love, is the wonder of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/10/2015 1:42:00 PM
This poem is as charming as you are and she is a fortunate lady to have a bard like you express tender feelings to show her how much you care Paul. I adored this poem! 7 from me!
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/10/2015 1:56:00 PM
To say that I'm grateful is to understate my feelings. Your words of encouragement and praise are precious to me; I hold them dear. Your poetry is exquisite; hence, your comments are especially—and sincerely—valued. Blessings!
Date: 10/20/2014 10:41:00 AM
You left me guessing what was going to happen till the end,and I love the positive conclusion.Such a lovely poem!!Charma
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/20/2014 7:55:00 PM
Dear Charmaine, Please know that I appreciate and value your kind, thoughtful comment. Thank you, thank you.
Date: 10/15/2014 11:01:00 PM
Beautifully written Paul! :) enjoye it. love & Light! xxx D.
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/19/2014 9:51:00 PM
Thank you, Dorian. Forgive me for delay in acknowledging your kind and thoughtful comment. Please know of my gratitude. I hope all is well with you and your loved ones, and that you continue to write lovely poetry.
Date: 10/15/2014 8:41:00 PM
Simply charming Paul - I loved every word from start to finish - its a 7 from me :-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/17/2014 2:27:00 AM
Oh Paul you really are far too kind of your praise. I would say I am unique in my style especially writing with a humourous touch but I am still on the early stages of an incredible journey in my poetry life and learning so much every day. Thank you for making my day! Hugs jan xxx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/16/2014 8:17:00 PM
Dear Jan, You are a marvelous poet—in a class of your own—therefore, your words of praise hold special meaning for me. I couldn't be more grateful. Love and every good wish to you and your cherished ones.
Date: 10/14/2014 11:42:00 AM
Paul, A very beautiful and quite touching write here with emotion artfully rendered. I enjoyed it immensely!! The message of all six quatrains is indeed quite powerful and most wonderful. A "7" from me Sir!! Superb Write!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/14/2014 7:46:00 PM
Always my pleasure Paul!! All the best!! Gary
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/14/2014 3:17:00 PM
Gary, Please know of my heartfelt gratitude for your wonderfully supportive and thoughtfully rendered words. I value them and appreciate them more than I can adequately express. Thank you, thank you.
Date: 10/14/2014 9:10:00 AM
such a heartfelt very beautifully penned piece brought tears to the eyes excellent pen flows golden in this paul
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/14/2014 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, liam. You're a highly credible source of support and encouragement. Please know of my appreciation.
Date: 10/14/2014 4:34:00 AM
A lively and lovely one.
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 10/14/2014 8:28:00 AM
Thank you. Your kind, thoughtful comment is sincerely appreciated.

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