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The Woman With the Violin

The painting's old and weather-worn beyond a time I'd never know, and dust-lined and bold. But still it's crude how the oil paint collides with aging lines in an age-old taboo. And daring me to find a part too daring in something named divine, and vivid in it's truth or steadfast with its lies. A shameless sharing of life that spreads a reality in color-sewn light that's told her she's promiscuos, she's been kept in strife to the old shadows of the night. But here she is after all this time, a smile for all as she takes flight unchanged. She's not aged with the passage of judgement, and unshamed. She stands erect, bare-chested and sure of her right to be what she is. A woman that lived with her quiet resistance. She lived to give her quiet echo through the distance. And now her pride could match a man's, as she bears her breast and strokes her violin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/7/2011 2:02:00 PM
An interesting poem, with a dreamy quality to it. Nicely done indeed. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:13:00 AM
I really like this, Erin...Loved the title and the way you described her. Liked the line `She lived to give her quiet echo through the distance.`, it really caught my eye. Emilia:)
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Date: 5/6/2011 12:30:00 PM
Your title caught my eye, Erin and your write is very evocative-- enjoyed how you depict this strong woman with the violin... and thank you also for passing by my poem :)
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