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The Woman In the Mirror

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I look into a mirror most days
And wonder who she could be?
That strange gray haired lady
Looking back at me with glasses
On her eyes and wrinkles on
Her face. 

She’s a total stranger to me
I remember the sparkle of eyes
The clear, smooth skin
That silly grin

I remember the dark hair
Streaked with highlights
Not graying roots
Beneath dye

I remember a joyful smile
That spoke of excitement
Sense of enlightenment
But she is decidedly
Old, lonely, accosted
With failures 

She’s a stranger in the mirror
Too old to be the real me
The girl so happy and free
When did the years go by
Leaving me with that smile
That says I have aged
More than I can say
Fiftyish has its way

I say, let fifty give away
The next few years with grace
That prays for a sense of purpose
In the ways that I take into stride
The sixties, seventies… all my life
And death… has no true bite
Because whatever happens
However much I change
I have Jesus, the way, the truth,
The life… His friendship
Assures me that I have
Everything I need
Everything there is
The chance to go to heaven
Gray hair and wrinkles, too

He loves all His children
Even those who know 
They’ve passed the age of 
Looking in the mirror with hope
Of looking back at a young lady again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/24/2019 11:17:00 AM
I've always felt, Regina, that there's a blessing in every stage of life. That accepted, I hereby predict that you will find yourself looking better and better in the mirror over the decades to come!! Think Barbara Bush, elegant and stately at 85, wrinkles or no wrinkles!... Beside which, 'Beauty is vain... A woman who fears the Lord; it is she who is praised!' Cheers! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/24/2019 7:12:00 AM
The shock of seeing that old guy looking back at me keeps me moving.....
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Date: 10/23/2019 11:37:00 PM
Wow, this an excellent write, Gina. Look into the right eyes, my friend, and see how they sparkle with delight ~ it's their reflection of you! Beats the mirror any day ;) Love this one ~
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Date: 10/23/2019 9:06:00 PM
We can relate, Gina. Well penned.
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