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The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe The mist fell over the lake like a grey blanket. Only the sound similar to a ranket. The water still and lifeless, not a ripple to be seen. The air not foetid but fresh and clean. And I felt a chill from the loss forever of my Bill. Sitting in the snow, my mind void of thought. Blocking the clarity, I so desperately sought. Enraptured by a numbness circling my soul. Seeking solace most peaceful and whole. And I felt a chill from the loss forever of my Bill. Enjoying the loneness, no wish for chatting. Glancing I saw a large wolf come pitter patting. I felt a hot breath behind my head. Its eyes piercing, though I did not dread. I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill" Without thinking I asked the creature. It stared at me with a chiseled facial feature. Why are you here, what purpose do you fulfil? Again, I asked, are you here to remind me of Bill? I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill" My dear Bill’s emblem was a wolf, a large tattoo. Not a man saved, all drowned captain and his crew. Dear Bill working on that ill-fated ship lost at sea. We had plans, Bill and I, he was going to marry me. I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill" I could not fathom why the wolf was here. I spoke harshly to the beast without any fear. Wolf what are you doing encroaching my space? The wolf answered, gave me a blank face. I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill" Where do you emerge from canine ghost? Are you evil, should I dread you most? Who sent you to unsettle me and joust my mind? You speak of my dear Bill, do you mean unkind? I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill" Again, I demanded an answer from the beast. Surely that was what I could expect at the least. The wolf did not answer, it just walked away. That is the last I have seen of it, to this very day. And I felt a chill from the loss of my Bill.

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Date: 6/26/2025 9:56:00 AM
Sorry about loss of your loving wife. Nice poem.
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Date: 6/25/2025 12:18:00 PM
Quite a tale you've written Wendy. I remember your husband was ill, did you lose him recently? My wife lost her mom in February. Awesome use of the grey wolf in your story. Beautiful creatures
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Date: 6/25/2025 1:54:00 PM
Okay I didn't know your hubby's name glad it's not Bill
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Date: 6/25/2025 1:32:00 PM
Hi Tom, my best regards to your wife, the passing of a loved one is a sad time, but seeing them suffer is worse. Merv lives (temporally - I hope) in a Nursing Home about 10 minutes from our home. He is recovering from a stroke followed 5 days later by a heart attack. He has therapy and Physio every day and I see him every day. His sons on weekends and nights that they watch footy together. We are blessed to still have him with us. Thanks for your comment re the poem. Not at all sure if this was what the sponsor wanted.

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