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The Wolf

after The Raven by  Edgar Allan Poe

The mist fell over the lake like a grey blanket.
Only the sound similar to a ranket.
The water still and lifeless, not a ripple to be seen.
The air not foetid but fresh and clean.

And I felt a chill from the loss forever of my Bill.

Sitting in the snow, my mind void of thought.
Blocking the clarity, I so desperately sought.
Enraptured by a numbness circling my soul.
Seeking solace most peaceful and whole.

And I felt a chill from the loss forever of my Bill.

Reminiscing a past, now no tenderness in store.
The bitter sweet raptures that lovers implore.
The ghostly spirits that whisper nevermore.
Subject to solitude, they call me Lenore.

And I felt a chill from the loss forever of my Bill.

Enjoying the loneness, no wish for chatting.
Glancing I saw a large wolf come pitter patting.
I felt a hot breath behind my head.
Its eyes piercing, though I did not dread.

 I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

Without thinking I asked the creature. 
It stared at me with a chiseled facial feature.
Why are you here, what purpose do you fulfil?
Again, I asked, are you here to remind me of Bill?

I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

My dear Bill’s emblem was a wolf, a large tattoo.
Not a man saved, all drowned captain and his crew.
Dear Bill working on that ill-fated ship lost at sea.
We had plans, Bill and I, he was going to marry me.

I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

I could not fathom why the wolf was here.
I spoke harshly to the beast without any fear.
Wolf what are you doing encroaching my space?
The wolf answered, gave me a blank face.

I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

Where do you emerge from canine ghost?
Are you evil, should I dread you most?
Who sent you to unsettle me and joust my mind?
You speak of my dear Bill, do you mean unkind?

I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

Again, I demanded an answer from the beast.
Surely that was what I could expect at the least.
The wolf did not answer, it just walked away.
That is the last I have seen of it, to this very day.

And I felt a chill from the loss of my Bill.
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Narain Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Sorry about loss of your loving wife. Nice poem.
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